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I hate her DAD
I love this story! They are so destined for each other!
Amazing, I was so addicted I had to go through Galatea, Inkitt and good novel for the whole thing!!!!
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This book has a voice, and I love it. It's not formal or literary—it's the kind of narration that feels like a friend telling you a story while you're both lying in bed at 2 AM. Moke Moke's internal monologue is full of casual asides and self-deprecating humor that make her feel like someone I'd actually want to hang out with. Take this moment: "Honestly, Moke Moke thought the worst part of this game was that everything had to be done manually. I mean, it's a doomsday game for saving all of humanity—why not some high-tech tools?" That's not just exposition—that's a character reacting to her world with genuine annoyance, and it's funny because it's so relatable. Who hasn't complained about manual labor in a game? The dialogue between Moke Moke and Bai Qingwan is short but effective. Bai Qingwan's reply—"I know my charisma is huge, but little princess Keke, my schedule is full today. Can I favor you tomorrow instead?"—establishes her personality in one line: confident, playful, slightly dramatic. You immediately understand their dynamic without any exposition. And the system announcements are a nice counterpoint to all the casual narration. They're stiff and formal, which makes Moke Moke's reactions to them funnier. She's out here living her best doomsday life and the system is just going "Ding! Congratulations!" like a robotic game show host. The contrast works.
Good book!
I can’t wait for more chapters to this book. It’s really getting good. I hope it’s updated really soon really soon. Knowing I know why she did what she did to him.
I agree I want book number 2 as well
nice work and please finish it on time
Love this whole series!
Very intriguing ..., keep it up author.
