.It has illustrations of the characters............................................................................................................................
Too many problems, two chapters that are paid for but just repeats, counting of money changes. From 100million to 1 billion, then back to 100 million. Where did the 900 million extra even come from? Not to mention the fact that the mc is too stupid with how they do things, it’s fully focused on Chinese, while also making everyone else bad guys, when it’s in truth a mix wher good and bad with everyone. Not to mention the fact it all seems more random and crazy as I keep reading. Like there is no plan, just a ‘idea’ then they write randomly, then go and make up random plot on the go, making meds of it trying to make it good yet sounding stupid. Many times when he should’ve used drone, or should’ve done things not as himself, yet instead he does things as himself, and in end outing himself as the owner of drone even tho they didn’t need to. The mc is dumb, the planning sounds rushed and incomplete yet forced into something and not even sounding best. Too much explaining and information without enough story. Reading it feels harder then it should, more a chore to read then it is to chill and relax and read. Normally I don’t make reviews but this one book had a huge chance to make something good but before it even started, it ruined everything and made trash that is bias towards Chinese, while also making it hard to read, and very much insulting towards some people, at same time as turning something people like into something they will hate. Idea of drone is neat, but turning it all into something more like propaganda, bias, and not doing full research while also making things sound unnecessarily too complicated when it doesn’t necessarily need to is just not worth continuing reading. Something that could’ve been a Diamond was crushed, smashed, and turned into trash. Ruined and unable to read without feeling like it’s a chore.
It’s really good sorry to spam. I commented on a bunch of the pics the yandere pic needs work. Plus there’s some you know you gotta get to etc. but I’m just happy with it all. Hope some of my pic comments made you laugh
ceritanya bagus , saya merekomendasikan untuk dibaca
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"Hi, I'm Zy." I said smiling.
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KRINGG!!!
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