LordRaven
That reincarator
Ch where?
I tried, really tried to like the mc, but I don’t. I don’t see how someone can casually write off sexual molestation as something normal, that honestly irritates me. In case someone wants to say something like ‘oh, the mc is just playing around’, or ‘ it’s not that serious’. Please google is your friend, if you are too lazy to check what sexual molestation is, here’s the meaning ‘ to make unwanted or improper sexual advances towards (someone)
especially : to force physical and usually sexual contact on (someone). What I hate most is an Mc that is supposed to be sensible, acting like a rapist, finding every opportunity to grope or touch the fl. From the summary I should I have realized, didn’t think it was going to be this bad. And if someone is still tryna say I’m overreacting, please bear in mind there are people in this world we have been molested who might come across this book and be triggered. The storyline might be good but the character of the Mc is a huge HELL NO.
When does mc get laid?
Last month I wanted to read this, but I saw your comment and, instead of this I start Outside of Time.
Outside of Time is great, I caught up, do u have any recommendations, new cool novels like outside of time (I don't like other Er Gen novels. Nor lightening...)
When will be the next update?
Great story and translation. Very enjoyable, great characters and storyline.
Love this story i hope it never ends!!
author really needs to work on making the narrative more compelling by doing more of showing and less info dumping! though the grammar is impeccable and conversations between characters are well fleshed out, I feel the story could benefit from more character depth, especially from the MC. Ortega seems a bit too basic to me ... overall it's not bad. highly recommend for urban lovers out there
A author can write however he wants except discrepancees, bad language and boring. This book developed two of these things.
After finishing reading the current up to date chapters of the novel, I decided to do a review for this. To put it simply, so far, the content is quite exceptional for an original novel and deserves praise. To the author, I would like to say, keep it up, I enjoy this very much for it's quality. To explain in more detail, there are several points of highlights.
Firstly, I feel that the sense of character and personality of the MC and even side characters are well thought out and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status. The characters are brought to life quite skillfully and their emotions are also quite well portrayed.
For the second point, although there aren't many chapters so far and is only generally one chapter per day, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more without giving the sense of boredom mid-chapter and skim through them instead. The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace. The details are well outlined without beying overly embellished. As for the chapter updates, the speed is quite fine as long as the quality of the content could be maintained or improved.
Last not least, while this would lean towards being an 18+ novel, with the quality of the content, it does not feel crassed and vulgar, giving off a more refined and sensual erotic feel that is very enjoyable to read.
Basically that's the end of the review. I do highly recommend this for people who enjoy a well written erotic styled novel. And once again to the author, thanks for the pleasant read, and I have very high expectations for the novel and i believe it will definitely do well for it's genre.
I had high hopes for this one but dropped at chapter 7. Weird MC, most things don't make sense and it all doesn't fit together.
