1. good story all in all but there a lot of plot armor and plot convenience so if you dont like those warning.
2. as pinoy myself all i can say is "NOICE".
3. HOPE YOU PUT THE 9 MOON/SUN EATERS (PICTURE BELOW)
The story was good until chapter 120 where the MC had a 180 turn and became a complete different individual for no apparent reason. MC just became toxic and all the previous relationships he had was just ignored
all I can is.. if you don't like an MC that has a one track brain cell then don't bother. This is one is a full copy paste cliché with an MC thats got a serious fetish for standing and receiving a beating and the enemies all don't have brain cells. They only live to give away free material, and increase MCs strength. or rather he's defense so he can receive more beatings .
I haven't done a review in a while but this definitely deserves one. Everything from the memories to the character growth is wonderfully done. Btw author, if you are reading this then I suggest you post this story in royalroadlegends and scribblehub as your type of writing fits there more than webnovel
The cover 5/5
The synopsis 5/5
The writing? It was amazingly written and it surprised me that Webnovel has such quality writer. This is a hidden gem and I'm glad to have discovered it.
I don't understand why this kind of novel gets picked.
dropping it. bye
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Alright Let's Begin,
1.Writing quality is bad.It's hard to understand what's going on due time skips and grammatical errors.
2.Story development so far is good.
3.Character design.... how should I put this it is good and bad at the same time(What am I even writing LOL...)
4.Yup, world background is pretty good.
The story has potential if executed correctly dude focus on grammatical errors(They Suck)
That's all
BEST OF LUCK
To: Author
The concept was good and interesting but the execution was disappointing
The main things that got me to drop this were that You over explain things, You under explain things, The story was rushed and The emotions didn’t feel realistic Partly because it was rushed but also because it didn’t feel like you had a good enough grasp of the emotions you’re trying to bring to the table I guess you could say
And of course the Slight but annoying grammar errors
I’m not trying to say that you don’t have talent or that you should give up I’m just saying that this could be better and that it was disappointing
Will this is a great novel to read, MC is my type that is ruthless and smart, the plot is good and I like it
keep going auteur withe this great work
This isn't worth your time. Double returns apparently mean 10x, 100x or anything else really. What will happen when he provides power to a disciple changes constantly over the course of a few chapters. Could be translation rather than the author but everything else feels similar. At the end of one chapter, the sect master is respecting the MCs decision and at the start of the next chapter, he is angry about it.
RAW LINK PLEASE
raw link plz
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