It’s hard to write a review about this book on account that everything is good and I have no criticisms. Looking forward to how the story develops.
The MC behavior is like he was born in a royal family rather than a cultivation one. Cultivation family would give you more freedom if you are the strongest. Just look at the Ye family. The current strongest isn't the head of the family. He focus on his cultivation. A royal family would want the strongest be in command.
Everything is good and I enjoyed every turn of the story...
The only thing that is bothering me is..... although this would make me look bad, and also needy, and a (little bit?) Perfectionist.... correct me if I'm wrong but isn't the right spelling for "Devine" actually "Divine".....
Really I don't mean to be offensive or perfectionistic, I just thought you should edit it since its always been being mentioned every time you talks about cores....
But all in all... I really enjoys the story... keep it up and please don't drop it....
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Awesome read! can't wait for mass release!
about snowflakes complaints, grow up
Curious to see where the mc goes from here...will happily wait for new chapters, just hope to see even more uses of his system for devious reasons
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I'm really liking this so far. Unique plot and taking a different point of view is refreshing. P.ease author keep up the good work for this lowly reader.
I haven't actually read this fanfiction I'm just reviewing since it doesn't appear normally for me
Overall a great story. Only thing I urgently request though is that the princess be killed off ASAP. Really too annoying. I’m in the 200’s now and I honestly don’t know why the MC puts up with her. Her presence makes things so complicated for no explainable reason. And she acts way to haughty for no reason. Only leads to mental demons and getting hurt.
Really begging and pleading for someone to tell me if she gets killed off or separates cause from the way things are going it doesn’t seem like it. The story is good but then she opens her mouth and I want to delete the story from my library. Good thing the authors writing skills keep me hooked or else I don’t know what I would’ve done.
Wow! This story is really intriguing