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keep it up, author, the word setting is a bit shaky but overall a nice story with a lot of potentials
the story line is so good this book has the potential to shine so author update it constantly
Author here! ???This is my first BL story and I hope to get your support by commenting, with your golden ticket and also adding the story to your collection to get updates faster. Thank you and welcome ??Tee-hee ;u2060-u2060)
Really good, i love the character interations
Really great story with an MC that isn't a whiny wimp and has to work for what he gets. The translation speed is great, 3 chapters a day but the trade-off is that there are sometimes errors like incorrect character pronouns or different spelling of their names (sometimes in the same chapter).
Good plot and good storyline indeed. I like the way the dialogue flows so well and so naturally. I did notice some grammatical errors here and there. But overall, this is a good story and I love it!❤ Would be back to read moree when new chapters come out.
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Not usually into alpha omaga stories, but you dragged me into this one. Your writing is amazing. Imagery superb and characters…wow. The dynamics are fantastic. Please keep it up.
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initially I found the title interesting so i decided to give it a go after reading the free chapters I realized that this novel is amazing altho the main character is op it says such in the intro and if you're not into that it's perfectly fine but if you are it's a great pick only issue i found was that some lines aren't fully correct which is fine since there's not much of those mistakes which is why my overall review is a 4.8 chapters keep coming and it's great if you're reading this give it a go you'll most likely like it
This story is SUPERR GUDD!! The writing is super top quality, its like with every word it just entices you to read Moreee!!! AND NOW WE HAVE LONGER CHAPTERS TOO!!! THIS IS SO GREAT!! I LOVE THIS
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