The beginning is really interesting. Being framed for trying to rape a sister when trying to help. Bombing to take revenge mutual destruction. Cultivating in the womb, kind of like the book NUT SHE'LL. I really Look forward to figure plots.
Useless rip off novel, demonizing other novel MC and endorsing pedophilia, Arrogant Young master style and being disgusting with teenage girl breaking off engagement after falling in love with a baby born few days ago
It was a good read for the first 10 chapters but after that it gets confusing.Some chapters are missing alot from it like chapter 18,19 and 20.
Reminds me of Outdoor Webcast. That novel was really unique but this one is even better. This is the peak of slice of life. I hope this gets translated.
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The premise was pretty interesting. The story was definitely enough to get me hooked and wanting more. However, the writing was simply atrocious. I have no idea if it's a translation issue or the author is ESL and is still learning English. Having an editor would help this novel a lot. Or perhaps even some kind of writing assistant to check for grammar and spelling.
Its too much cliché. Story has too many forced and unnecessary plot. As for characters its your mc who is thrash in is previous life but suddenly become courageous and challenging guys here and there. Overall iits ot my cup of tea.
One of the best cultivation novels I've ever read, at least top 5 of all time for sure. The characters are extremely well written. The Mc can be seen as the "rich young master" of the novel, but an extremely smart and charismatic one.The novel is well aware of the tropes inside it's genre, and plays really well within them. Every character has a personality of its own, and makes their own decisions based on their personality.Let's not even talk about the world building and cultivation realms, everything is well explained and has a reason, not just the same a to b increases qi by a billion fold. While reviewing this, I come to realize that this is probably top 3 of all time.
In my opinion, this is one of the best novels I wrote until now. I cannot vouch that everyone will like it but I'm pretty sure that the majority of readers will learn to love this books, the characters and the authors(definitely no bragging)If questions occur, you can find a discord link in my profile. Join my discord server and ask me directly. :D
Read it and you will love it...
Mu Heng and Lin Lumi. Oh my god. The dynamic between these two is EVERYTHING. Ten years of fighting, clashing, opposing each other at every turn - and then she writes him a love letter just to disgust him. And he TAKES IT SERIOUSLY. That moment when he reads the letter and says 'spring catkins fly and fill the courtyard; my heart yearns for you, but you remain unaware' - I literally screamed. The fact that he's been harboring feelings this whole time without either of them realizing it? The rivalry was actually just mutual pining in disguise? I'm not okay. And then Lin Lumi's reaction when she realizes he actually believed it - the shame, the horror, the desperation to explain - it's so perfectly written. She's not a romantic lead, she's a girl who just wants to go home, and now she's accidentally led on the most powerful guy in the capital. The blushing scene where Mu Heng gets flustered and can't think of a proper comeback? That's the kind of detail that makes character dynamics feel REAL. He's usually arrogant and in control, but her words cut too deep and he's left red-faced and speechless. That's when you know the author understands how to write tension between characters. And the fact that he leaves saying 'you will regret writing this letter' while clearly being the one who's been emotionally compromised? Chef's kiss.
Great read! I can’t wait for the next book!!!