It is nicely written story so far with very good English used with little repetition of certain phrases. The struggles of the MC were vividly expressed the only thing that was missing was more chapter.
seems good but would like raw name
another dog novel written by a dog chinese author with 10 IQ MC and 5 IQ characters no other words needed amirite? Honestly how do they manage to even write this without their fingers breaking and their minds shattering is beyond me
A good novel! The spelling mistakes are minimal, the chapters arent too short, the update stabIlity is great, the world background is clear! The only downside is that privilege chapters are early.
Overall, i recommend this novel for people to read :)
Gaya bahasa yang menarik dan alur yang mebuat kita tercengang saat membaca membuat buku ini sangat bagus untuk didalami. cover yang terlihat sangat mengartikan novel ini akan seperti apa
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wow, such good English, m really not educated enough..
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The concept is good but the problem is the character development and story development are not upto the mark. The story is getting boring as i am reading ch 15.
Can't the translator give out the raw links or raw name
Basically guy reincarnated/Isekaid to a xianxia world become number 1 expert and about to die. So he got a system before his death and the system promised that he will be revived as long as his Disciples reach Saint realm, which they did 3000 years later. He got partially revived because before his death he got an enlightenment and makes him more powerful, therefore more energy was needed to revive him, which the system does not have. Now he is forced to basically becomes a dungeon core and have to kill people to revive.
Imo it's not bad. There's some inconsistencies with some term but not a lot. As for other things such as character.. Well it's only 20 chapters and until now there's really not much that the Mc has done..
Overall I would say to give it a try, might be good might be bad.
everything is basic templates, nothing interesting no plot, basic af basically xdd .........................................................
Good story , Nice starting and also detailed but not too much information which is quite good. Well I want to say that it's enjoying but don't use too much cliche like love interests are kidnapped and threatened for being r*ped which is only thing I don't like. It decrease interest in story and let readers worry about girls which too cliche and unacceptable for me.
Well nice , keep it up