I have a feeling that this is a story like those anime harem stories. The MC is obviously completely broken and a lot of women around him as well. Furthermore he can't hold any relationships and for whatever reason the person that loves him the most and he's the most compatible with is his minor sister.This story honestly just reads like one where the MC has masses of women that have feelings for him but probably half, if not more will die or died already. And I think that when he has to leave the mortal world, most of the women are left behind or die while trying to by him time or some bull****.The story has an interesting setting but it has way, way to many women, that are close to the MC but he can't protect them since they're to many and to weak. After like 50-60 chapters it gets weird reading about him trying to be secretive and him never being honest about his feelings. I can only imagine that it gets worse when he enters the cultivation world and has to protect himself, Alina and everyone else that is still alive at that point. Currently not sure if I want to continue this story since the appeal is just not there to repeatedly read about trivial drama that's gonna pop up.
The stories plot is original and interesting, although there are a few things that could be improved upon, such as grammer and character details. I find that there have been some consistent mistakes like when the author uses sense instead of since or when they use do when it should be due. The author also could describe the characters appearances in more detail because some times I find it hard to picture them. These are the main short comings of the story that i've found but besides that i've found everything else enjoyable such as the personality of the protagonist who is strong and reliable and the plot of the story. The giant monsters are really cool, especially the city bosses. ?
Even thought this is similar to "The Legendary Mechanic" and "I am a Legendary Boss
Self-proclaimed professional gamer MC acting like a noob? Check.Mary Sue MC? CheckPlot Armor thicker than the Author's face? Check.Loyal Fatty? CheckInstant Harem of breast jiggling women without even trying? Check.Harem wasted on Clueless Virgin MC? Check.Bland Thug encounters that exist solely to show how awesome the MC is? Check.
It's a pretty good novel. The cheat is interesting and the MC is fairly likable. The worldbuilding is well.... lets just say the Author is a big fan of the Souls series.To the point I've read the MC enters a dungeon called "Hive-like" (aka Souls-like"), where there are invaders etc. like the covenants in Souls. There are also familiar bosses, mostly from Dark souls 1 and 2. The love interest has a skill that summons bosses from Elden Ring, and the main "bad guys" as of now are the Healing Church worshipping the Moon Presence from Yharnam (from Bloodborne). This all would have been great to read, but unfortunately the translation quality drastically goes down after the first 50 chapters, and continues to deteriorate.
I release chapters with astonishing frequency... two chapters a day and four chapters on Fridays...5 star for this statement . hope you can continue doing it.
Story already ongoing at MTL Name = "Heavenly Dao List"Chapters - 266Raw - 天道榜：苟成剑神的我被曝光了................................................
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this one is very nice.... the shamelessness of the ML is super funny!!!!!!?????????????????????????????????????????????
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