ChanganChen
Amazing story, new ideas and ways that that differs from normal cultivation novel. Wonderful novel, with great story, power fights, figting realms, divine beast, lots of humber, and much more.
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weird but interesting I want more please
I just can't go on, clearly author's focus is "comedy". By comedy I mean classic cn novel comedy that usually means lowering character's IQ as needed and forcing the plot. I have read only till c16, but mc has already taken predatory loan, made bad business deals etc. All things that even below average intelligence person could manage. I mean he didn't even freaking go to the bank for loan!!
Worst of all, author is undermining his own character and story setting all try make cheap laughs for some special people. I mean mc is supposed to be genius and graduate from best university in universe basically. Not to mention he's thousands of years old. But yeah, he has basically no emotional control, intelligence or knowledge about anything. Well anything that gets in way of author making "funny" aka. stupid, cringe and forced situations happen.
This is my own work so I will of course be biased and give it 5 out of 5 stars. Also I've never written anything like this before, so for the time being I'm just having fun with it. I hope you can enjoy it and please leave insights if you can.
Instead of giving it the impressive name of God's realm you should give the title the idiotics realm. It's story isn't nice. The Author completely ruined the main character. The story is full of idiots. I don't have any good points. Too much nonsense talk. I thought it atleast have humour, none all all.
Thank you all for giving my novel a chance. I am a very active author as I read daily on Webnovel as well. I will try to respond to all questions you have and appreciate any criticism you have that can help me improve. I hope you enjoy The Archaic System - A New Beginning!
Its very intresting, I only regreat that, I found this book do late.
man, the first one got me depress and also i feel like theres a meaning to matias's story it's really interesting really i do love it, hope to get more updates soon
Nice story love how it's going
Excellent outstanding and great
Love the FL
The stroy goos the oath is best i seen how can he like this at all i like it i see this is the novelbdst of course i guess so good to you i see
The author's writing style is clear. The subject seems ordinary at first, but then you see that it becomes interesting. The protagonist is like a white paper on this, it's very suitable for character development, so I'm wondering about character development in future updates.
