I love this story waiting for more updates. Hope all is well with the author.
very captivating
huh? speechless ? is there any sequel of this book? pretty please ? i love the story. congrats to the author! part 2 will do! lol
What I have read so far, has been enjoyable. The fact that the author started off with a chase scene, is a good choice to draw the readers in. My only minor nitpick would be to go over the chapters and fix up the places where the odd word is missing, or minor grammar mistakes. Otherwise keep it up!
Thx man, glad you noticed I had the talent to be one ;)
77 chapters and counting, the stack stays strong
Is there a possibility for the chapters to be reupload with the proof read version?
If you’re gonna lecture someone about how a power system influences social standing and interactions please do it right. First of all even if everything you said is true ur point itself makes no sense. Wym “he can” THE WHOLE ARGUMENT WAS ABOUT THE WHY NOT THE HOW. Nobody just gets up and becomes Batman because they feel like it. Sure you could chalk it up to “the snake influenced his mind a little” but not to the point of becoming a new entity. Also moving back to your beautiful response, I didn’t really care about him being ruthless and killing people. I cared about how he did it, no hesitation or remorse just cold and apathetic without any character growth or mind numbing pains or any explanation on how his demeanor became like that (snake excuse coming up lol). To answer the final question, humans main survival trait is our adaptability in all circumstances no matter if it’s hard or complicated we will survive. So with that in mind delve deep and thinkabouttheprocessofchange. Noroom
Though this may offend some people, but I must say, writing platforms really need a mode of monitoring standards. I understand the concept of freedom of expression, like everyone can express their creativity but based on my awful experiences with "inexperienced" authors, some measures needs to be put in place. Just about anyone can dish out whatever abomination their minds concoct for the mass' consumption. Like we need quality control. Because the amount of idiotic writing greatly outnumbers and even suppresses those of great quality. Such platforms shouldn't allow just about anyone to produce subpar novels. Anyway this is just a rant. No need to take seriously.
Definitely feels like there is a secret missing chapter at the end. It's not the worse way to end things but it definitely is abrupt.
I just completed reading, and... it was a bumpy ride. The most annoying thing of all has to be that the author simply suffers of amnesia, either that or the translator writes whatever he wants — but that's probably not the case since even the translator leaves some notes correcting the author in some chapters. Way too many plot holes.
Aside from that, the novel suffers from the "unreasonable syndrome" problem. Let's just say that if there's 100 characters, then 99 are straight up imbeciles that think with their butts.
Character development is very poor, and that's mainly because of the author's amnesia — he even forgets the name of one of the wives at the end and changes it, can't be more laughable than that.
Also, forget the tag "romance", because as I said above, the author just forgets about the characters and they appear once every 1k chapters for 2 lines of dialogue.
The MC is alright I guess, he could be considered what sort of saves this novel from being garbage... Shrug
Now i know why tf it was so familiar i had already read the manhwa