free chapter has decreased to 15 now ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
This Novel is quite interesting. Mc goes to another world and build village, kingdom e.t.c which must be last 300 year.
Story quite good.. MC have to face different enemy and race who wants to destroy the village or kingdom.
but later story is because sometimes like repeat in middle.
I strongly suggest you read this novel or Levi hates you.
also give it a like for Levi.
This story is making me lose brain cells, it goes premium at ch 9 despite it being unreadable. Nothing makes sense in this story like at chapter 1 they author just copy pasted the entire wiki of a nunchuck like wtf
Hurm, 3.6 star from me. I'm going for lower, but it may make you feel depressed...
My opinion is nearly the same as Elder, the one who review before me... The story actually bordering average and boring at start, but after a few chapter it get trash fast... I get it, you want to fvck as much as you want, get thousand harem member as fast as you can, but this is way too.... Hurm, how to say it without hurting you feeling?... A bit too.. Virgin-ish?...
This is an ok reincarnation story.
I do think the author was too easy on the main character, making him gaining power too easily.
Overall the story is good although it is a trope novel.
To be fair, you have to have a very high IQ to understand Hero System! Transported into Another world. The humor is extremely subtle, and without a solid grasp of isekai most of the jokes will go over a typical viewer's head. There's also Alex's heroic outlook, which is deftly woven into his characterisation - his personal philosophy draws heavily from Ari Kohen's literature, for instance. The fans understand this stuff; they have the intellectual capacity to truly appreciate the depths of these jokes, to realize that they're not just funny- they say something deep about LIFE. As a consequence people who dislike Hero System truly ARE idiots- of course they wouldn't appreciate, for instance, the humour in Alex's pervertedness which itself is an indepth outlook on the psychology of the struggle of males on females in modern society. I'm smirking right now just imagining one of those addlepated simpletons scratching their heads in confusion as Rip Corez's genius unfolds itself on their computer screens. What fools... how I pity them.
is it okay to do review on your own work? lol and here I am doing review on my own work just for having fun.
well if you have time, come and spare your time to read
The story is pretty well-knit, the characters were introduced appropriately while the author took his time to build the world. The plot is interesting to explore There are minor sentence structure mistakes, here and there otherwise it is a polished piece of work.
P.S. Author San could you work on the synopsis a little more, it would get you more readers that way.
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Sometime you pass on something and then found that you pick up a treasure that is what I fell now. If we talk about world building and chreacter is amazing this one have big potential to Challenge in with top on and this I Vow to Heaven with - good luck keep up
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