this story has gotten better since my last review.
I can't believe how good this author is!!
if possible could author do a similar book with SAO as reference instead of Solo Leveling.
i believe millions of readers would flock to you for such work of art.
Highly recommended this book.It's not only intriguing but funny too.
Perhaps the dullest level-up game system novel I have read out of dozens, there's absolutely nothing here you haven't read before if you've read half a dozen in the genre. To be frank, I read the first forty chapters a couple of days ago, and I could not remember the plot until I opened it to refresh myself.
The MC's personality is wildly inconsistent and he keeps doing dumb things that plot armor saves him from. For example, he gets a key to open up an S-rank dungeon, thinks to himself, "only a team of S-ranks can clear S-rank dungeons", then goes in and almost dies to the first monster and only doesn't by sheer and utter luck that it's in the only class of monster he gets a buff against.
His system has an automatic growth cheat, which is a big problem, because he gets stronger every day with minimal effort... but he still goes off an risks his life for no reason at all, because he has no unusual motivation to do anything. He's almost died half a dozen times in the first 30 chapters, and there's no reason for him to, because he literally gets stronger every single day, and again, he has zero motivation for risking his life.
Also, literally every other person he runs into is a villain out to kill people. This is absurd, because they essentially live in a near-future S. Korea and society and the superhumans are supposed to be well-regulated. He's spent his entire life being a bottom-rank loser and hasn't died, yet as soon as he gets super-powers all of a sudden everyone he runs into is trying to murder people.
It all feels like a barely coherent freshman author attempt in an over-saturated genre, and I just can't understand why this story is rated highly at all.
i read this novel somewhere before . it was really fun for the 140 chapters that i read. nice mix of comedy and action . the story takes place in modern era with cultivation elements much like the red packet server novel. characters are not many and so far no useless characters seen. also the author uses the comedy due to misunderstanding and age gab a lot which i really like :p
I can't lie after 337 chapter if you don't like this you have to be mentally insane, the story is really good, I can see if someone doesn't like the time skips, but it works perfectly with this story and I hope the author doesnt stop with the way he is progressing because its perfect
It is not the best book in the world but it sure is interesting.
People competing each other in storage auction and a touch of supernatural power, it sure is a good time killer.
Food scenes here and there can make you feel hungry too.
I am looking forward to this story's future development. :)
Well This îs an Awesome Read with Well Thought characters and Best Waifus
So I would Recomend This To Who ever Pays Visiting Here
Author îs Good Guy Who tries To Be as interactive as possible with us.
Just Keep it up and Dont Change Much Cuș I Can See potential in You kid
This from now on You are renamed As
Kyle_Waifumaker.
i read up to chapter 30... it good... better one out of all the rubbish,
it have comedy, serious moment as well as a decent plot.
one of a few i want to pass the selection!
don't drop this.This is a gold.
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Spoiler alert... About cultivation realm of this Novel..
Finished the whole story (558 chapter)
1. Mortal Realm
2. Profound Realm
3. Spirit Realm
4. Void Realm
5. Unity Realm
6. True Realm
7. Emperor Realm
8. Supreme Realm
9. Heaven realm
10. God/Devine Realm
11. Tao realm (36 minor stage)
12. Open world Realm (1 mile to 100 millions mile) ( Many minor stages in this realm)
13. Chaos Supremacy Realm
14. Transcend chaos realm/ Dao realm (minor stages)
15. Dao Creation Realm (minor stages)
16. Supreme Dao Realm
17. Supreme Dao Lord
18. Way of Heaven
19. Heavenly God (not sure about the name)
20. Endless Realm (One thought can creat everything) (Final realm of MC)
First of all, the grammer ruins this book for me. I could spot so many grammer mistakes. Adding to this, the "sound effects" were weird and kind of killed the atmosphere. And there's a distinct lack of comma's in the authors paragraphs, which is annoying as well. Other than the terrible grammer everything else is decent. Please fix your grammer, or at least read the chapter before uploading.
I really like the humor aspect of the story and admire the concept of human psychology that you put through in the story. There are some grammar problems in the early chapters but it doesn't hinder in understanding the flow of the story. Some paragraphs are way too long which are kinda hard to read using mobile phones. Also, there are some cuts or spaces in the first chapter that you forgot to fix. Overall, your story really shows how high standard your skill in writing is. I hope you keep writing more stories since this one is already completed.