not bad .
I'm not really into sci-fi but the action was the only thing that kept me going. since i don't watch sci-fi movies, I don't know how to imagine it and without characters description, it makes it harder.But apart from that, I basically like how it started, even though I got confused sometimes
Thank you for reading so far. This story is a prequel to something me and a few people are working on. If you are intrested in this universe(and minecraft), the discord will soon be available for you to join.
So far it's looking pretty good, a typical reincarnation storyI'm looking forward to how the characters get fleshed out in the future chapters and the MC's past too
I actually like this. It's got a good story, nice concept, and the MC is actually kinda aight. Definitely one of the best ones I've read, and it's not stuck behind a paywall once, so that's one more reason why I like this. Although, the chapter updates aren't consistent, I don't really think that's a big issue.
A great book, wonderfully written, absolutely intriguing. Love the way the characters are given a proper personality and the way the story progresses. Hope you keep updating like you always do.. Hope to read a lot more in this book... I have really high expectations for thia
Coming into this, you were probably baited by the title. DO NOT LET IT MISLEAD YOU! This story is masterfully crafted with intricate plotlines, characters, and world-building. Yes, harem elements exist, but that is not the only thing it has to offer!All the characters are wonderfully crafted with delicate details to their backstories, and they all make logical decisions. Not once during my reading did I think that any of the characters felt fake in their dialogue or their actions. The main character Jack, is multilayered and deeply connects to the narrative, creating a powerful driving force for the entire plot.Also, can we talk about the amazing writing quality?! As an author myself, the way characters converse is completely in line with how I would expect real sea folk to talk to each other! The descriptive language makes this story seem as if it's being narrated like a sea shanty!The comedy is also very well done! None of it felt cliche and It got me laughing/giggling occasionally without me even thinking about it. None of the jokes flew over my head, the author does a wonderful job of presenting them organically without hurting the agency of the plot. He also interweaves them at the perfect moment so the tone/mood of a scene is not impacted. Give it a try, I'm sure the first chapter alone will hook you!
C'est très intéressant j'ai juste envie de continuer à lire pour découvrir la suite
surface of mercury, in the northern hemisphere just above T-Galactic plateau.
As soon as we sit down, the teacher ask us about the homework. Then we answered in instantly. "Not yet Mrs ...!"
So YeoLeum and Lee Chan Yeol
"Yeah sorry was thinking about something don't worry Gasper"