What is this **** ? Another garbage novel with literaly garbage story , garbage translation to , garbage, garbage, garbage , garbage, garbage, garbage
Awesome story! Hopefully, more chapters will be uploaded everyday!
Author, Good job and keep up the good work! Thank you
'killed in a random school shooting'
so our MC is an american... interesting
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Nice work
I have read till chapter 22 and till now its really entertaining. really good story
Prologue and backstory taking way too long blah blah blah
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Writing Quality:5/5 Perfect.
Stability of Updates:3/5 Irregular updates sometimes every day or every 2 days.
Story Development:3/5 - Nothing interesting that has shown up it feels slow which is i'm not a fan of.
Character Design:3/5 Personally the main character confuses me, Sometimes he feels like an ***** but sometimes like a kid.
World Background:4/5 Seems pretty good enough.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Author’s shameless honest review :)
I believe I am a good writer and note taker so their shouldn’t be many mistakes. But if you do find one pls leave a comment saying “found a mistake” no need to even give a reason. I will check it and fix it.
The only thing I am worried about is how often I can post. I will try my best to do 1 ch a day. But problems may occur.
I am very proud of the world I have created. It will have basic elements you see in system novels. But I dont think that’s bad as basic are basic for a reason. For example I love military arks.
I have planned out the major plots of the story and I find it incredibly beautiful. My favorite books are Lord of myteries, Super gene, Castle of black iron,Legendary moonlight sculptor, and Supramcy games.
I have taken inspiration from these and hundreds of other books I have read.
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While the relationship between him and his sister/cousin is sweet, almost everyone else emotionally abuses him. Be advised. I stopped reading once his aunt took advantage of him after a massage. In any event, the synopsis needs to be updated and more tags added.
It's a new concept to me. The old man who is going to crush the villains and become extra ordinary. I love it.
I do think the chapters are a little too short but its an awesome read. Great job author.