enlightenedpupil
Imma put it on pause, chap 980.
-this book had the potential to be 5 stars. The author strong points are :making likeable characters, balanced power scale and overall interesting powers, very good humor(plot kinda basic and linear tho). The characters are so well written and interesting that mc isn’t even top 3.
- why is this the biggest fumble in the history of novels? Author randomly decides to adopt a “system” even tough he is perfectly capable to write and doesn’t need any crutch to progress his novel, in fact, the system messes up the whole story and adds tens of gigantic plot holes that leave a bad aftertaste while reading it. Its literally self sabotaging, actually wicked work on his part.
-also the romance is unfortunately bad… yeah ik its a slow burn and shi, but slow burn has to make sense, u cant progress one chap and then the next one ur back to square one. I feel like bro added romance only so he could fit a few more snarky jokes in.
Rejoice bois because this novel is finally HERE! ? Elf queen is da best!
Let me correct you there is it may not show up in the category but let me tell you there is if you read it
I feel like every other novel is based around some nonsensical gimmick like a dense MC or a story where everything could be avoided if the characters had basic communication skills and talked to each other. It is very frustrating.
Read up to the end of Nina xi story. Will continue, but I feel a certain type of way how the writer’s pov of dark skin people. I know Asians see dark as ugly and that is so wrong to make fun of people’s color. I’m sure they would not like if someone spoke about Asian eyes ?. We are born a certain way. There is beauty in everyone.
Anyone know where can i read the prequel of this novel myst,might mayhem?
E uma história para você lê sem pensar muito estou gostando até agora gostaria que continuasse postando capítulos ................................................................................
NGL,kinda racist especially when I saw the category of #DARK??
This was horrible. Saoirse was dumb and stupid. Alex was an asshole. What is wrong with you all liking this crap. That this book has won best book is very disturbing and says a lot about the bookcrap that is on this app.
please continue the book...
this is very good story. the plot are written very well. the
Great story!
