A good story, it can be slow paced some time but it picks up really fast and slows later again. The characters are good and really developped, the world too. I really want to read more.
Im pretty much enjoying this book greatly. A gem that needs way more views , that is what your story is . Every chapter is enjoyable to read .
SighI cant express my mixed feelings for this novel properly. During the first half of the novel it was really heartwarming but later on the divine relm arc left me somewhat disappointed. For example lets say A is the enemy of the world and B helps to eradicate the bad guy A. We can conclude that B is the strongest in the world. However the dissapinting plot is that those guys who he saved actually form an alliance opposing the B guy saying he is kind of tryant or something. Also they know B is out there again but for some reason the mob thinks that they can contend with the B guy for apparently no reason. Is it too much of expectation for wanting logic?
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Idea of the story is great. The MC got reincarnated in a whole new world.Character and background of the story is well described.The only problem is writing. There a little bit grammatical mistakes but they can be ignored easily as the story has a smooth pace.All and all though the work has great potential.Well done Author!Waiting for more chapters.
I think this book has great potential and the story seems great but the grammar can really use some work as it makes the book hard to read.
41 chapters in and so far I really like the story. Especially the diary part which was quite good. The Mc is someone I really like and I hope I see some great moments of him
Writer fails to make any difference it's just stupid repeating the same process without having any major change to the story and the fact the system is ****ty
This is a great novel, loved the characters and their interactions, really reminded me of other great novels of the same genre, but Stardom has its own taste. Hope you concontinue with the good work!
The translation is a little rough but this is a charming and whimsical story.....with cats !!!!I think we need some actual adventures but the last chapter sets that up so here’s hoping.Hope the author keeps going.
The story's eye-catching and most of all, thrilling. The flow is not too slow, and also not too fast. Just the right speed for the readers to enjoy. It's slightly difficult to predict how the plot is going to be because there's only a few chapters, but I see that there's definitely some plots within plots, and with more plots. I'm looking forward for more updates.To improve the novel more, I think that adding commas in between the long and tricky sentences would be a good idea so that the readers could understand more.