This stories are great and became a nice read.
Very interesting and nice
29 chapters 1-19-23
Will the book still continue and when???
Amazing book
more chapters
Wondering what is the posting schedule it seems it’s been a month or two without an update?
I love your story! Keep it up!
Another amazing story in this series by this author! Absolutely worth a read! Excited to read the next 2, but honestly cannot wait for vipers story to come out! Impatiently waiting ... fantastic job author!
waiting for updates
Great story
Sure, here’s the revised version:
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Kinda Meh.
It’s a one-shot, so I get that there isn’t much to write, but it feels way too rushed. It could have benefited from a few more paragraphs to flesh out the interactions between the characters.
However, if this were part of a longer story, I think it has a lot of potential.