Keep going author. 2 of your novels is in my library so keep going. and I love the star wars fan fic novel of yours. The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.The World is Big yet we can only see the small part of it.just a additional word count.
this story really amaze me..because it shows that a person can be successful if he choose to..
for this only being 7 chapters (so far) i absolutely love it!
Honest review, first chapter will already tangle you by lady Lucinda to hit the next chapter. The interaction of mother and child (Theodore) was priceless, she'll do anything for his son and he'll do anything for his mother. I also like how the author imagine the dance party, it really caught me to seat in front and watch Lucinda and his dance partner together. (i thought at first they know each other ?). Anyway the update stability is also perfect! World background can be created with story development so there's no problem with that. Aaaand that's it! I totally recommend this novel. Happy readers, happy author. ??❤️
i think ntr stories usually written by someone with weird fetish.
a person who got green shouldn't be harem god.
i think author thought mc as his enemy when he wrote this
So far, despite the edits, I’m 38 chapters in and the MC is difficult to like, or even tolerate at times.
Smut isn’t necessary for a harem to be enjoyable, but likable characters are. At this point, the mc is frustrating. The few potential harem candidates are a subordinate and a cranky neighbor.....the secretary is the most likable character, but the interaction with the mc are awkward, but not in a funny or good way.
I will read a few more chapters since its free at this moment, and there is potential with the story concept, but eliminate some of the angst and get the mc to accept his current predicament.
Plus, the Panda! The darn thing does not help the story. I know it’s supposed to be some type of comic relief, but its just vulgar and mean.
Cant wait for more chapters to appear this is going to be one hell of a ride..............
Thank you Author for making the second book lol im hella excited
A nice work. I think if you looking something good than you can give it a try. A good mc with a harem wall yes some time he is also OP .just give it a try .
Author's note: There are few things that should be cleared before you pick up the story and give it a go.
1. The intention of writing this gaming novel is not to educate noobs. There are so many gaming novels talking about every skills dragging hundred of chapters in increasing the levels of the skills and blah blah. So to say you won't find cliche things. If you cannot digest something new then do not try this story.
2. My writing style differ. I am an original author and I have my creative space so my writing has its difference which might be new or unacceptable for many of you. So if you decide to read it then it means you can tolerate different writing style. If you still complain then your complains would be considered groundless.
3. I am not native English speaker and English is my fourth run on language. You can expect grammer 'degenration' at many points in the novel. If you feel sour reading poor grammer based story then my suggestion is to save your taste buds.
4. I have no plans of including romance or harem in this story.
5. This story is created in alternate universe so keep your common sense limited to yourself.
6. I will be hiring artist to draw main characters so that you can have general idea about our MC's team.
7. If necessary I will create character lists and the list of professions other than the weapons. Anyone interested to take look at those lists can join my discord server.
8. Enjoy the story development with the author. Have questions other than the above mentioned then leave a comment here.
I love the plot. Kudos to the author. You really described story well. How will the protagonist end up huh?
Hey you ,yes you there. Grab this novel and give it a read. A worth reading novel it is!
I don't usually read action when it comes to books, but this is such a great read! So looking forward for Ken's improvements. Amazing plot, although I do feel bad for what happened with Ken's parents.
So much filler, so much dumb characters. I'm astonished with author's ability to make something THAT bad.
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