I think this is a book worth putting in library and following. First of all, the author is polite and replies well to feedback, and that already puts him above most. While I have mixed views on the book, here's a disambiguation of those:- The story development, character design, and world background are all good. I can see the needlework that the author put in order to add depth to the world and make his characters distinctive. While I don't enjoy very dark works a lot, I think this novel tackles dark themes decently, even sprinkling in bits of philosophy here and there that remind me somewhat of Berserk.- While the sum of the story is functional, I have issues with the writing. The author has a decent grasp of grammar but needs to work on punctuation and syntax, as some sentences have way too many punctuation marks while others have none. Other sentences are constructed awkwardly, losing their meaning in the process. My biggest advice to the author would be: write short sentences. You won't lose yourself in complex grammar, and the meaning will be clearer. Another issue with the writing is a more important one. You tell too much. There is work put into the exoskeleton of the novel, but it all loses its value if you throw it to us instead of gradually showing it.With that, I think the author will do a fine job in the future and wish them good luck. Give this book a read.
Good story so far with stable updates. Hope to see more
Honestly it was good ? . Waiting for the upcoming novels . Story was great ?. I hope you will be a successful writer in the future ?.....................
Personally...I like the book, it's wonderful ❤️.You might like it too if you read it, comment, like, rate and add to your library.???????????
It is still ongoing so I'm not sure yet but so far it's good ??
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This book is one of my favorites. The quality and plot development is very good. You'll never get bored. And a warning though, it has alot of cliffhangers. Once your in this hole, you're hearts will be bursting to the seams because of anxiousness waiting for the next chapter.Hands down to one of the talented young writers that I've known.If you want to have advanced chapters, I can recommend to check her out on, https://***.patreon.com/tinyeyecat
This story has unique world building and concept. And Mirabella Flamire’s journey is thrilling, and Eros La Velle’s charm irresistible. A beautiful blend of romance and adventure—each page sparkles with life!
good reading nice work i hope we can more stories like that
Literally loving this novel. I hope that the romance starts soon. I think it will focus on some character named Maria according to the synopsis. l wonder who is she?
i have been looking for a good football insert in fanfic and this is the best i have seen so far
By far gonna be the best story on this app!