'Or at least that's how it was 200 years ago.' Keita thought while running.
and so the invisible dragon lafd cooly and prepeard to use his ultimate skill
Story starts out great, then the author starts to drag the story out, milking every chapter. The mc gets draped in outrageous plot armor, all powerful people like him, all villains despite differences in age and cultivation are outwitted, and yet the nothing really gets done other than the occasional formation blowing up, which then magically leads to everything going the mc's way. Story would be so much better if mc gained strength in a more tangible way, but all he's done for hundreds of chapters is eat ghosts and not advance in cultivation. Was enjoying the "eats gods" and "divine god in the making" angle until I realized it just takes away any suspense that was remaining. Cultivators in meat space won't kill him because they all love him, ghosts can't kill him because he eats them, there's literally nothing in the world that actually poses a threat.
i really want this book i love this to read
great book sometimes there is a pronoun swap in conversations but still story is intresting , right pacing and good development of chas and the world .sad that its so underrated .AND for the author .......
In my life I have read 2 short stories and fiction books in general. I was never attracted to them because I thought they wasted my time and were generally useless. I thought so until this moment, until I read this novella. Here it’s the other way around, I read and immerse myself in history, thereby developing my imagination.The story describes business life and love, where the characters avoid attachment types. Everything here is set up correctly and I like it. It’s easy to read the story, as well as to get into it. The chapters are divided in an unusual and organized manner. Overall, this is the best thing I've read. Well done author!
Overall a good story, I just don't care for it personally
good idea for the story , but its hard to read with the poor quality of writing
love it so far keep it up great work!!........................................... ..........................................................
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Its start is unique compared to all the other DBZ fan fics I've read. I'd recommend it to ppl. For those ppl who read reviews before checking out a story the MC doesn't start on planet vageta nor earth so check it out.