{I will just say that for the sake of fairness.}In the first 100 chapters or so, I was thinking about how to make a review of the annoying things inside the novel...but now I don't think I need to do that............................................For the first few chapters, you will get a feeling similar to those xxx based novel (like The MC was just going to collect women to xxx after that with some lose storyline and cheesy dialogue between the MC and those 1 or 2 dimension women) but after more than 50 chapters I get to understand the difference and the hidden beauty of this novel it completely has no relationship with the first impression you get, it's starting with the typical way of other xxx novels but after few chapters, you get a glimpse of great story, you can even see the difference between each disciple and their feeling and come to understand the MC more and know why he would do this, and sometimes you will find how annoying the second disciple when she disrespects him even though he is the master but eventually you found the reason for all that and then come to an astonishing discovery and it was all about a beautiful story filled with romance and comedia to be able to get a family and building feeling...yes there are many disciples and all of them had a regular xxx with the MC but each one of them had been hiding her insecurity deeply inside their hearts and even the MC will have some enlightenment about his feelings and his thinking about them. Simply it is about how they will grow to truly love each other, and build their forces and family.And the most important part of all this is that there will be no young arrogant master here and there at least not in the same way and even when you think that the MC is going to have a hard time ahead of him you will find that all this worry is for nothing.....because all those supposed to be a dangerous situation ends up with unexpected ways with much damage to the MC.In the end, it's a beautiful and lighthearted novel with much love and xxx.
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Website : qidian china Views : 3.12 million Rating : 8.3(973) Chapters : 648 Status : ongoingrank : 23Word count : 2.08 millionauthor rank : great
Worth Reading! plot development is good and concise, all the character may not have a detailed background but can be considered stable and pivotal. Interesting point is how the world structure takes place specially how the author's use of diverse Historical Places not just the ones in MC home country
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[Translation Quality]4/5a. First thing, MTL vs TL. Even though I am not a Chinese speaker, i have consulted with someone who is (credits to Weirdo) and the latest chapter indicates a proper translation by Chinese speakers and not a machine translation. The TL is coherent enough albeit he didn't like how the "Demonic Sound Clan" was TL-ed among a few trivialities. So whatever the past teams did or whatever the past staff of this translation brand did, the current staff are not MTL-ing. I would suggest to the new staff to make TL notes on character names, faction names, chinese characters and their explanations on why they were translated that way and other possible translations, and indent that stuff at the end of chapters as it would showcase that they actually think about this and give the users some peace over how they treat this work in terms of translation.b. Naming Standardization. I haven't re-read the whole novel, so i don't know what the current state of the past chapters is. Naming standardization was not bad. The only thing i could complain about in the past was that the editors couldn't agree upon the name writing styles (combined or separated). Examples (each line is one character's name):- YaJi / Ya Ji- Cao Zhilan / Cao Zhi Lan - He Qingman / He Qing ManI don't know how things are now, so take this as a grain of salt, or the staff can take it as a suggestion to edit if they missed some character names so users can find it easier to google search characters to brush up on their past appearances and involved events. A poll on whether separated or combined are more memorable or not would be good, as user input is important and a poll can be indented at the end of a chapter like TL notes. I suggest the staff use polls from time to time since user-staff interaction is bad on this site, or at least indent a Discord channel or some chat channel or something where the staff can be reached instead of e-mail, as it is more interactive in regards to user feedback on grammar and spelling and other. c. Grammar was sometimes great and sometimes horrible in the past. Again, i don't know how things changed in this regard now when it comes to past chapters. The new chapters were very readable with a few spelling or grammar mistakes. After copy-pasting Chapter 299 into notepad++, i instantly found about 4 or 5 legitimate spelling mistakes by scrolling through it and observing what words were underlined, with 2 or 3 false positives, and it took me 30 or so seconds to do this.[World]The world is rich and vast, with cultivation and laws sculpting some places geographically and climatically. I would suggest to the users to write a glossary of places and factions and their descriptions as they may need it.==========================SOME SPOILERS BELOW===========================[Cultivation & Martial Arts]This novel has an inheritance system for cultivation. Interesting concept which becomes less and less relevant the more the story advances because the MC becomes part of a cultivation world where everyone has powers. I wish the author focused a bit more on this, but i guess it's too early for me to say anything. I would suggest to the readers to especially write the skills and descriptions of the powers that the MC gains through the story, because it will immensely help with visualizing the battles and understanding what is going on. The author didn't make it memory-friendly. The battles themselves are damn fun in my opinion though. [Story & Characters]The MC is an anti-hero. He's not as evil as Warlock of the Magus World MC, but also not nice either. If you want a novel with someone who has a moral superiority complex and a boner for justice and ethics and all that boring jazz, seek another work. The MC is selfish and cares mostly about survival and adventurism. His personality of an adrenaline junkie passed on into the new world, with his wisdom and intelligence rising as he goes through the story and has new experiences, but his soul remaining the same. You can regard him as a vagabond who only stays in places if they provide power.He is not a hypocrite and admits on doing things on his whim. He is also lecherous, which comes with an "i can die any day, so i might as well" attitude as well as his way of steaming-off from his adrenaline and/or special cultivation technique.The work is NSFW, so all easily triggered and frustrated feminists, conservative religious soccer mommies, and sexual moralists in general, seek another work instead of producing farts in the comments that only serve to stink up the room and achieve nothing beyond that.The characters are varied, even among the powerful ones, and apart from the cliche like arrogant seniors you also have seniors who step back and think before building enmity with the MC. Some characters are forgotten, some characters come back to have interesting interactions, so i can't say there's nothing to lose in memorizing characters. Write a glossary as you read. Side-character focused scenes don't take too much of the reader's time most of the times as they usually take up a quarter or third of a chapter when they happen; but they all have a purpose and aren't exactly fillers. The story itself isn't bad in terms of development speed; it's among the average level leaning slightly towards fast.=========To the staff i would suggest: Make a glossary page for the readers.Make it in chronological order of introduction and emphasize it as that because this is a good spoiler-countermeasure as readers then know up to which line to check the glossary. It is not only for the good of the users, but also for the good of the staff in regards to naming standardization.
√ Good translation quality√ Nice MC√ Straightforward system√ Gaming Walkthrough√ Legendary Release Rate( this makes me wonder if I can keep up when they got their premium chaps)
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The troubles of MC is worth binging the entire book. It's funny, and relatable.Plot is nice, World Background is good, Characters are well thought of.I'll be reading this for the foreseeable future.
Sounds interesting, but the worry for this sort of thing is making it sound realistic. If he's supposed to gain knowledge of super advanced technologies that we don't currently understand, it will be incredibly difficult for the author to describe anything about what we wouldn't know. So it would probably turn into "this happens because he knows it, don't ask how."
I'm truly impressed with this one.I love quick transmigration stories and this is my first seeing one with a male mc, I won't talk about spoiling the story, but I will say that the first arc is very powerful, well thought and characters are all fleshed out properly, no seriously I still have lingering attachment with the characters, and I want the mc to continue living in that world, but when I start reading the second arc boom! I think it's now my favorite, character interactions are just interesting and lifelike.Well even though I loved this story I will be professional since this is a review so I will still have to say cons that I saw to help author sama and some readers.About the thing I say about lingering attachment about first arc is true, and I think the author is to be blamed(seriously) even though it's just a trial but I think Author haven't closed the story very well, ahem sorry for this little spoiler, I seriously thought that the time Traveller girl would be a love interest since I get the fate vibes but I was left in a cliffhanger since he suddenly left in the middle of a "date" (If you already plan the mc to return to previous world then I won't say anymore but if not please consider giving the girl justice by giving her a chapter dedicated only for her.)Even though this story is not that kind of genre the mc should have take his mission seriously and thought more about it, considering he will be dealing with "villainess" he should at least fortify his physical self defense and since he has a goal he should at least be more proactive into preparation since the system doesn't say that it will be always modern world he will be transmigrated in and I always think in real life that what is given can also be taken if he fail his mission his goal might just pop into nothingness unless this saving world from villainess is just farse and failing from preventing villainess to cause harm and death will have no consequences or punishment.Well that's for my review even with the cons I still love this story so I'm giving it 5 stars, cuz also knew that a novel is always a novel and never will be reality that's why inconsistency and lack of data would be always present.