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The Novel is very Interesting and refreshing.The plot is very nice so far, i especially like the way author is dealing with the character development and his ambitions can be seen by just how large the novel universe has been described including galaxies an all.The MC is quiet a charmer so for and unlike other righteous mc's i prefer a more practical and badass like in a real sense 'bad'ass MC like this one.The author has done a pretty good job so for.cant wait to see how things will turn up!
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This novel is too overrated.The translation sucks. I could feel my brain cells dieing just trying to read this.Anyone who is going to read this, read with caution.
most everything was average and cliche. That, in and of itself, isn't a bad thing, so long as the characters are well developed and the writing skillful.Unfortunately, both the characters are writing quality are bad. The writing quality was mildly irritating, with the bad Grammer and exposition being handled very poorly.The characters were by far the worst part of this book, and the reason I dropped it. The characters didn't feel one but like people; rather, they were one dimensional and seemed to lack any complexity or realism.For example, the all men except for MC are villains, irresponsible, or lusty pigs. One girl (at the beginning) was the vain, big breasted onee-chan that instantly falls for the main character when he saves her. MC is a do gooder with a shop. He failed to be interesting, at least to me.
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Seems like a pretty good Sect Development novel. Might not be as good as H1NF but still pretty good. The cultivation ranks are Meridian Opening Realm, Martial Apprentice Realm, Martial Master Realm, Martial Ancestor Realm, Martial King Realm, Martial Emperor Realm, Martial Saint realm, Martial Empyrean Realm. The spirit root grades are low grade, mortal grade, mid grade, high grade, saint grade, and divine grade
every chapter is too much explaining it makes the story boring
Honestly this story is pretty terrible. I mean the amount of times face and courting death has been mentioned in just a few chapters is off the charts. It's gotta be some kind of record. The MC's intelligence is very low. He is out here making some really dumb choices, and his character is straight sus what with the talk to the system making him powerful enough to conquer his wife...speaking of the system, it is terribly designed even in a sea of terribly designed system novels. You'd really have to turn off your brain to enjoy this one.
good read the author has uploaded upto chap 326 on scribblehub
Man I like the story so far but man is the grammar horrible. Sometimes I don’t even know if Mc is a female, narrator or a kid named Chris. Idk if it’ the translations or the author keeps Messing up with points of views
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