DemiurgeOhara
How do male MCs react when they get periods in gender bender? ? Do they realise that suddenly a full week in every month is constant suffering, pain and harmonal disbalance for them??
B**bs and thighs are good, but what about the downside eh
I was just reading the Lin Family part 1 and felt like something was missing when in the next chapter, the protagonist returned home without any resolution… is there really no “Lin Family part 2”?
Thank you!
Yes, its completed now
Do u know the name of it
Damnn (≧▽≦) ı was so dense after this comment ı dropped the novel (ㆁωㆁ)
Any necromancer story with a waifu? Recommend some please...
so after a year and half, we still don't know nothing? or he won to the lottery or something happen here. (I hope the first for him)
I’m going to say my piece in the ending now. I just finished this story and everyone is talking about a trash ending, but what they are really meaning is that the story was never completed. The author likely got bored and decided to just axe the story midway through. Do not read this story, especially since it seems unlikely that the author is planning to write the sequel that he mentioned after the horrid ending.
TLDR-
Horrible ending, incomplete story, don’t read anything from this author.
The primary issue I have with this novel is that the author fails to utilize the system effectively. In numerous instances where the protagonist could have leveraged the system's benefits, the author sideline it, resulting in storylines that lack depth and relevance. For instance, during the early business arc, the MC could have gained skills in business, accounting, leadership, public speaking, and negotiation through point redemption, but these opportunities were unexplored.
Several other aspects stand out:
(1) The author's portrayal of societal norms feels outdated, even by the standards of younger generations in China. Furthermore, he incorporates debunked concepts across various disciplines, including social, psychological, biological, medical, and historical knowledge.
(2) Character development is weak. Characters often act hostile towards one another without clear motivation, serving as a crutch for action sequences. The author frequently undermines seemingly good characters by revealing negative traits or backstory, suggesting a bias against genuine goodness.
(3) The narrative borrows heavily from mid-1980s to early-1990s Hong Kong action and comedy films, which can offer insights into the story's origins and the author's influences. However, this reliance on clichés might limit the narrative's originality.
(4) The story lacks a moral compass or consistency. Characters behave unpredictably and without consequence, with other characters accepting their actions mindlessly. The author attempts to justify these actions through forced explanations, which fall flat.
(5) Starting around Chapter 300, the novel becomes riddled with racism and jingoism.rape and even justifies the romantic relationship between a rape victim and her attacker, occurring around Chapter 580, which is highly problematic.
In summary, the novel misses opportunities to engage with its system, presents outdated views, has shallow character development, borrows from dated genres, lacks moral grounding, and contains disturbing themes.
This is my second read of this, and I must admit that it's quite rare for me to revisit a book unless I find it truly captivating. Surprisingly, this one met my expectations. The characters maintain their original traits from their previous lives, but they've evolved positively due to the improved main lead (ML). Unlike many重生故事里的蝴蝶效应, which drastically alter characters, this one keeps their growth grounded and logical.
The main character's monetization-driven nature might seem overpowered, but it's fitting for this genre where significant change is expected. What I appreciate is that the MC doesn't force the ML into a relationship from the start, allowing him to grow independently. Their dynamic, despite the MC's initial inferiority complex, is quite charming as the ML reassures and supports him.
The only downside, perhaps, lies in the portrayal of villains. The obnoxious stepsister sticks around throughout the story, which feels a bit persistent compared to other revenge重生故事. The other villains appear only when necessary and disappear once their purpose is served. My critique might be slightly dramatic, influenced by other narratives.
A spoiler follows:
The author truly explores multiple possible endings, which I found delightful. Seeing the ML in both storylines, the cute, intelligent, yet occasionally mischievous side, was heartwarming and entertaining.
[End of Spoiler]
This is an excellent read, especially for those who dislike dark narratives. The plot maintains a sense of realism, with one notable exception - no character can match Satou's prowess.
In an earnest and genuine manner, the story is exceptionally well-crafted according to the standards of Chinese cultivation novels. The protagonist, FML (an abbreviation likely referring to the main character), showcases impressive character growth. He exhibits emotional intelligence and consistently outmaneuvers others, making him a strong and relatable "Chad" figure. Despite momentarily overlooking his younger sister's romantic feelings due to their sibling dynamic, he remains assertive and sets boundaries with potential admirers, even by directly addressing them.
The title may be misleading, but the narrative focuses on the protagonist's wit and strategic thinking, both in defeating enemies and manipulating alliances for his advantage. The plot stands out positively, avoiding common tropes of mass murder driven by superficial judgments. Instead, the MC employs calculated tactics, sometimes enlisting others to handle threats, which adds depth to his character. His self-awareness and ability to leverage his strengths make for an engaging read. I would confidently rate this a solid 4.8.
