I love the storyline but the wrong names or change of names takes a big chunk of the experience. Please go through and fix POVs and change‘James’ to Logan to solve a lot of misunderstandings
i dont play games but this story actually makes me wanna try gaming! this novel is awesome! try this out everyone!
Love your books, but the endings feel like cliff hangers. Like the book just abruptly ends. However I enjoyed reading.
Funny and interesting, though I just started reading
Nice work author
The character description is good the story progression is great the back ground setting is easy to comprehend I cat critique your grammar but over all is good great job keep on improving and writing don't give up <3
In love with this story cause it has a lot of twists and suspense in it which is attracting me towards the story a lot
For real!!!!!!
I really don't understand what the person who gave this 1-star review is talking about. Their comments seem delusional and false. This is a genuine underdog story where we follow a heroine who was initially portrayed as a misunderstood and somewhat unfortunate villainess. She faced constant sabotage from her family and an evil fiancé—actions that were even worse than those of Cinderella's stepmother. In her past life, she was an orphan, yet she fights against injustice to bring happiness to children. It’s truly a very heartwarming story.
Well that sounds interesting
No one, from what I remember, most the sex was from goblins raping people
HAHSHAHDHAHHA I IMAGINE HIM THE SAME THAT HAIRSTYLE IS A CRIME FOR MY BABY ??♀️