you did great job and I like the type where mc is forgotten his memories and that gurl is his memories just makes is more interesting waiting for more chapters so make it quoickly have a great day
Overall a good book. I recommend everyone to read it. later part one the book is excellent.
Love this novel,let see what will become of this novel all the same I will be given you 5 stars that doesn't mean I like you hmmmmmmmm maureen naruto.
Everything is just top-notch from writing quality to character descriptions to the feels and emotions. When reading a shifter story the audience needs to have this emotional connection which the story is providing in abundance. Also, I dislike abusive toxic MLs and Ranon is far from that, loving what a green flag he is. That's the truth definition of being strong, to take care of the weak and not abuse. This story has all the elements of becoming top-tier, keep writing dear author and good luck for the competition. I am rooting for you.
Thank you for writing this book, keep up the good work
Seriously, at first I loved this story. But the more this story progresses, the more it really becomes a mess. We don't really see the primordial vampire we expected when we started reading the story. And then she accepts that her servants do anything to her, give her poison, forcibly puts her to sleep more than once.
Did you drop this?? This story was getting intresting
Good work author, O like the cliffhangers on the end of each chapter. Keeps me hooked up
The pacing is steady, allowing the tension to build naturally. The world feels familiar yet frightening, which enhances the story’s impact. It's a thought-provoking and engaging read for anyone who enjoys dystopian thrillers with a scientific twist.
Okay, so far 29 chapters in, I'm a bit confused, ik our protagonist, was in the wind kingdom getting some intimate action, but then it cut off to a whole different section out of nowhere. I'm unaware if this is just a flash back? but that wouldn't make sense, as our protagonist wasn't this knowledge of himself during that time prior to flash back. but it also doesn't seem like a jump to the future. idk maybe it'll be explained later or maybe I'm just misunderstanding something. overall though, I'm enjoying it.
I Greatly Enjoy reading this novel, I have read many novels of different genres, and only a few of them make me excited enough to wish for more chapters, although, at the time of writing this review, it has only been 104 chapters, the depth of the world and the character development has left me entranced, I wake up each morning looking forward to see how the story unfolds. *spoiler start* though Rumia has the cliqué holy fanatic vibe, to the point it borderlines on psycotic, shouting heretic at every chance he gets, I do hope he only represents part of the religion of the "Holy King
Immediately I sit down and prepared my cherry smile to greet him. "Hi Writerz."