Rating: 3 starsWhy? Because the translator is shameless and this story deserves better. It's honestly a really great story. However, the translator has decided to go premium and, unlike other premium stories, has continued his 1 chapter a day release schedule. Let me say that again... He is now charging 12-13 stones per new chapter (up from 4/Ad watch) and he is still only releasing 1 chapter a day. Other premium series tend to at least release 2-4 on a consistent daily basis. This is truly unacceptable and the only reason I gave his 3 instead of 1 is so that people can know that the story itself is genuinely good. I just wish the translator didn't suck so much. I wish he had passion for it still so he could release more than 1 a day.
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It was interesting until the harem began
Excellent idea and world building. This novel has plenty of potential. Love the idea of receiving a medical system. Can’t wait to read more of it.
Terrible Ending ruined everything ??Before the forced/abrupt ending it was actually decent. There were a few problems that made it a little rough around the edges but nothing that couldn't be solved in later chapters.
the characters are rather repetitive, you're eithera. the protagonistb. the beautiful flc. the pretty girl who dislikes the MC but regrets itd. MC fanboyse. MC fanboys foreign edition (same story as D but less screen time and respect) f. xenophobic foreigner who gets face slappedg. Chinese competitors who get face slappedh. MC family/family friends at several points in the story it's stated how so and so foreigner thinks they're better than Chinese people but actually Chinese are betterthe protagonist tries to take back shares of Chinese companies from foreigners because they should belong to Chinese people but happily accept share of foreign companiesthe MC also makes a point to basically only speak Chinese (because he's Chinese) and expects others to speak Chinese to accommodate him even in foreign countries (note. he can speak other languages he just doesn't want to because he's Chinese)
the stories is good , but i think its too much unnecessary details , you can make it more simple and easy to understand... sadly the updates kinda slow for me... women and harem development also good , at least his harem not a vase and have a lot action...
Hope you continue the story. I am bored reading Chinese novels. This novel really fulfills my desire.
well, story development is a bit rushed like he just completes one event disaster and new disasters are in line for him to solve. well, atleast like some other novels, mc doesn't behaves naive and doesn't bring trouble to himself that's a good thing. world background is good but it seems like everybody is only focusing on him too much. well enjoyed it. keep up.
now no one knows who I am and my not care but i have to go out here and say i love the book to the point that this right here is my first written review on this app and that may not seem like much but I payed to get to read up to the current chapter because I could not wait for the next chapter and I still cant but I just want to say that I love the characters I love the flow and I cant wait for more so thank you to the writer for all your work sincerely -a fan of the material
So far i've only read the 20 chapters available so i can't speak much about the novel, my only complaint currently would be certain translation choices, the term Budo for example, also in one chapter spears are called guns.It's easily the best of this batch of trial reads and i can totally see the future potential of the novel, it's not like some trial reads where the MC is already near the strongest around in 40 chapters.
In-flow plot, beautiful Characters, exciting lines! It needs some punctuation corrections but apart from that... I love it! Keep it up ? Refreshing read!