Story was great but there was an entire paragraph with an incorrect name, plus other gender mix-ups.
Great book
Excellent story. I'm hooked. I hope you can update soon.
really love this book so far
Love love love it!! I'm a fan! The only thing I'd say is the tenses switch from present to past very often and the sentences can run on. But that can easily be looked over as I love the story and the tension driving the story!
More Chapters coming this weekend :-)
Just unlocked chapter 5. I am hooked. Read one of your earlier novels and am so glad you are continuing on with this new book.
step mum is a witch...
step dad urghhh ..
now her mate too, fate's cruel
nice read, got hooked from the first sentence
pls more updates! this book is interesting
i could read this story non stop
Very interesting story. I'm hooked!
Very nice exciting and interesting book.