This novel has done several things that makes it great. 1st the introduction makes since , is reasonable,established the mc purpose and avoids standard cliches that I have grown to find irksome bc I know these cliches usally lead the mc in these novel having hollowes desires such as desiring power bc my clan discarded me excedra which usually quickly becomes irrelevant and kinda of bland.2nd The system is greatI like the fact that the system isnt solely focused on his on development, and to be hounest I'm a bit tired of reading system novels were the mc drools over option that will make them super powerful. It aspects like this that breaks the balance if novels and makes me question indivduals IQs. So for that concentration of power to be lacking is refreshing.(as side the system is kind of sassy/funny and I am aware that as a system novel the mc does have a huge advantage over others) 3rd the world building is decent I understand the dynamics of the world he is reincarnated into, the characters arent one noted cliches, and there quite a few characters that are still being explored developed. and since this is a new novel that's bound to have alot of recurring characters it's only in the nature of the setting to .take time to develop.ultimately I would recommend this novel eventhough it might not make you fall in love with automatically, it certainly wont cause you to blow a gasket
this could be the next big thing. but u kinda fu*ked up everything. anyway, a fresh concept.***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
It’s disgusting to be attracted to children. People who are need help. It really makes me mad that this is on this app/website. It’s fine if you say that the kid is cute and adorable but to say your sexuality atractted to them is messed up.
For this story it's good enough, I quite like stories about Idol or Trainee so this is a suitable story for me to read .. I hope the author doesn't drop this story
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Enjoyed the novel on patreon. Is this novel actually dropped? because i feel as though alot of effort was put into this novel and would be sad if it were actually just dropped and instead was under a different name. Thanks
hey there, I actually found this story because of the deal with ben 10: ultimate predator's update requirement, I was just going to leave a few comments without actually reading the story just to get new chapters for ben 10, but the more I read this story I got so engrossed in it that i forgot to leave comments ?but seriously author if you're reading this, i love your works and have actually added many of them to my library, and this became one of my favorites as well, my only complaint would be the info dumps but iIdon't really mind.thank you for your hard work, keep it up ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
How do you end the story right before the big bad guy??? Why is it cut so abruptly short? Who is the big bad guy? What are the gods doing adjusting to human life? Do they ever fight the big bad guy or did they earth gaurdian just want some pretty goddess on earth....
Brain dead mc bro where is the part where he is brilliantly smart i dont see it hes dense too bro
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This story is great, could not even stop reading until the end, good story line, nice character development, everything just very superp apart from some situation whereby author kept on repeating same plot armour. Just a great job from the author and we need more from him.