I like it good job man little bit of spelling errors but it's fine. I can't wait to read the rest of the story looking forward to it. Keep up the good work.
It’s really really good.Just that could you get rid star thing that are covering up the words because Those thing are distracting my reading experience.Also PLEASE don’t make the mc op because every time I read those kind of stories, by the time I caught up to the author, I had to drop the story.99.99% of authors who the mc op will ruin the story.
Im actually happy with the non-system tag cause i think system stories are just lazy. i mean just think of any of the great system novels and just imagine them with a well fleshed out magic or cultivation system and not the ones with exp points or whatever they use
I expect a good story out of this one. At the very least, the characters must not be ****** idiots who do nothing but spout out arrogant words, while looking down on the MC only to get face-slapped or killed by MC later on. Frankly speaking, I am fed up with all those repetitions. I don't know why there are so many fans for these kind of 'idiotic' cultivations novels. Perhaps most of their readers are just underaged kids or adults with childish minds? All they expect from the story is how the op MC will cultivate, kill, face-slap, cultivate more, kill more, face-slap more... In other words, Zero character development, Bird-brained side characters, and Enemies with mental defects.
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One of my favorite books, just finished rereading it again. it would be really cool to see someone make this into a manga
One of the absolute most promising novels i have read lately. The author sets a solid foundation for his magic system and we can even see character developments (although more with side characters, the MC is likeable from the very start). The MC being a cold, rational and calculating individual leads to many funny (in crude ways) and truly satusfying moments. An absolute must for anyone who wishes to read a story with credible developments in both the MC and the world he was thrown into.
Keep up with the good work author!
Super nice story, im totally hook.
Waiting for the next chapter again ❤️
can not wait to see what happens
very hard to put down. each chapter flows easy to the next. very good read