The story is good however, it is difficult at times to figure out who is speaking. Not really liking the fact that there is one person's POV but then there is narration mixed in it which is irritating and confusing. Stop with the narrarator and just give the story by each person's POV.
Getting better with each chapter!!
spelling needs to be checked but so far I'm in
Funny love story, they will fall hard for each other these two.
i found some kind of
Loving this story so far it’s a great beginning hopefully it will be finished soon. Then I will finish the story. I can’t do unfinished writing get invested then the writer just stops for whatever reason.
Finally with 824 there is some silverlinings. Let's hope the author keeps with \\"the honesty is the best policy\\" finally, and wraps it up. Deirdre's character truly annoys me now, ignorant and passive aggressive.
This book needs a serious edit!!! You can't follow it at all. It's a good story but all over the place, and it seems like she missed several chapters in between chapters.
When Vishnu said he is straight. Me be like: ...
Your writing gives me butterflies in stomach, what am I supposed to do? Fall in love with you, that already I am, thanks for your marvelous job love.
Great story, different, well written, and full of suspense. 10/10 would recommend.
The book us great and very engaging. Keep writing ❤❤