The story is amazingly repetitive to the point it feels like the aim is to fill the word count.
The MC keeps saying how insulted he is and mad he is at the way people are treating him, but instead of dealing with it in the most direct way, as an amazingly OP cultivator who has lived thousands of years would, he decides to play weak every time.
Its full of cliche's to the point that it doesn't feel like an original novel, more like a merge of two or three popular ones, you don't really need to read it to know the storyline.
Really good novel. Quite intriguing, nice pacing and quite unexpected end. Thank you author!
it's not letting me use fast passes for chapter 26???
Greetings and Salutations...
Hay 1st and 2nd chapter is same please do something about it
Also THE ORIGIN SYSTEM ON OTHER SYSTEM REQUIRED is too good .
Keep up the good work also increase the post rate if possible.
I enjoyed how the mc is low key but at the same time he is now a beta mc. He is very assertive with what he wants.
Another point is the world building, i loved the world that the author build. It’s a mix of Japan and UK.
Just one point, I would like to recommend the author to explore in the future movies companies too.
I see boring sypnosis.... uuuurrrrgggghhh
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I see comedy tag.... YEAH BABY!!!
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Only now I pray that she has a system.
Please let this be a system
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I think this book is the fourth or fifth generation of plagiarism. It's scary how they kind of come back. I'd be surprised if I got off to a better than mediocre start.
this has a very interesting plot with complex relationships..I can't wait to read what happens next..please update soon
When's next update Author?
So: a really good premise and an interesting ability. Special forces and an ability that can multiply or reduce the laws of physics and other peoples powers, which gives a solid base to build a story on.
Character design: Starts out really good, the MC seems well thought of. But then the "legal loli" appears and he turns into a horn dog. She pampers him, he is - this close to fudging her and what the heck happened to my nice story and the good premise?
World Background: Actually great, well thought of and interesting.
Writing Quality: Pretty good for a Webnovel.