All I can say is that this is funny asf ?! We have to love narcissistic ,sassy MC! This man can literally make excuses out of anything. He’s really petty too, but I love him! The title and the synopsis caught me! Good work author ??
This novel is bad even if you ignore the "china numba one" nonsense.1. It's a cultivation novel disguised as a sci-fi novel.2. Whatever "science" given is literal BS3. Most of the "story" is just reaction dialogue to whatever the MC is doing.4. Lots of bashing of South Korean, India, Japan, US, other Chinese rivals, etc.5. Casual racism sometimes
Wow just wow
Correct me if I'm wrong
80+ chapters only for the events of sth around 3 of 4 days after getting system
The cheat code is op so the author tries to put limits on them and make the story more fun which works
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Anyone who know how to find this raw?….............................................................................…........................
I love this novel but where's the updates that I'm waiting for ? chapters pleased don't let this novel stop please support
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Chandu is once again back with a masterpiece
Writing quality is very good, very minor spelling mistakes(gendered words sometimes mismatched, couple words are missing a letter or have a wrong letter turning it into another word) overall you wouldn't really notice the mistakes and generally won't be missing any information due to the mistakes. There are some noticeably cringe moments in the book but overall, it doesn't make the book worse.
The story development is excellent. The author puts a lot of effort into the story and how it develops. The story lacks much of the info dumps commonly seen in the Vr gaming genre as the story takes more of a wait-and-see approach in understanding how the world works. The story develops outside the Vr world and the author creates a unique world that is not earth to help the reader suspend their disbelief and avoid large info dumps.
Overall the story so far is very good and interesting and doesn't feel like a bore to read. The story is still very early in its development but still has interesting plot points that engage the reader. For fans of the Vr genre, this is a treat that is different than other Vr genre books with how there is a real story outside the game and how the main character isn't overpowered or super serious about the game.
A good opening with it's currently 24 chapters, the characters have a clear motivation and the story setup is interesting. There is some room for improvement in the writing such as grammar and sentence structures and in the more descriptive parts. Sometimes we get the explanation after it already happened which makes the story a bit choppy. Overall right now there's alot of room for improvement which at times take away from the story at certain points but also means that this already interesting story can get even better. Looking forward to reading more. Keep it up!
I can do it too!