This is a truly breathtaking and captivating story. Well done. The world building, the characters, everything is impressive. This story seamlessly blends it's ideas into a fantastic narrative.
The writing is so elegant. I can’t wait to read on and find out what’s next! This is real fantasy writing that is not typical and so well thought out. Creative! Mesmerising! Beautiful!
These novels are the ones I crave the most!!
Amazing like how the story is going so far . I hope Mc get some character development to get him a little more destructive without have the use of a passive skill to make him bloodthirsty but every after that is amazing keep up the good work
Wow, the first chapters gave him the system. And his arrogance swelled like a balloon, as if he had reached heaven. I am still beginning the novel
71 chapters in an I still do not see the MC being carefree as the summary says.
MC is brutal, dragged into the xianxia type of kill or be killed. The part about him quietly tending his farm is actually a lie - he sneaks out and kills his enemies, and then heads back. I was expecting more carefree and his opponents not being able to do a thing to him while he peacefully farms, or needs to defeat his enemies only when trouble arrives with a snap of his hand. The dreams aren't actually told, just mentioned at a glance.
Characters are a joke, MC is barely ok based on what he does, but everyone else has a scheming third villain type of personality. What a joke. The ferret and the eagle has a better personality than the enemies.
The 30 chpts in the beginning is ok. There was potential. Spiritual knights sound interesting, but 70 chapters in, MC is letting me down.
At a certain chapter, it is briefly mentioned a particular alchemist refuses to help sects because he is carefree and could care less about the world. I think the real MC is actually that alchemist and not the current MC since this MC is being a petty typical xianxia MC that aims to kill everyone who threatens him and not a carefree one like the summary described. Seriously, if someone thought you were dead and you escaped, why bother going back to kill the guy if he never put you in his eyes, nor will he attempt to find you since you aren't related to a sect and live in a secluded valley?
The other thing that bothered me is how the MC would go through a dead body and search through it - blood and guts because he found a treasure inside the guy and not on his bag/loot. I'm hoping I really read that wrong since MC is not being an ideal character to represent a carefree path in the world of dreams.
Great start to the book. It's everything you want in the beginning of a book. It gives great background but does not have to much detail. Overall great story, can't wait for more!!!
Very good, Nice characters, Almost no cliches, engaging worldbuilding
Tl:DR C+, Has potential, take a binge when it hits 75 chapters or so to see how it develops.
The Good: the same old good rpg system in a cultivation world concept with a solid twist. The basic premise of this novel is well thought out and the author has spent some time to flush it out in the chapters.
The Meh: like many others in its category the novel needs an editor. In its current form the novel reads like it was written by a high school freshman. I understand that the author is not a native English speaker, so kudos to you friend for putting the effort into this work, but you have lots of room to improve. Look at Once a Human, Now a Paracite as proof that improvement is possible. God speed.
The Bad: the adage of "show, don't tell" went out the window. The pacing of the naritive needs improvement and the ******* and release cycle might as well not exist. In its current form reading this novel is interesting but unsatisfying.
Where's the rest this is so good☹☹☹☹☹☹But i shall waitttt!!!...I like this more than the other one...though they have similar mc in the sense that they both have some undead nature. This mc has alot more sense
I wesh that i live in that world that govern by power not ah power of maney but ah power off your self ... but my life is really lonely thank you for ur novel ..
The story is quite captivating, and it got off to a good start in capturing the attention of the readers. I've read several chapters, and so far, I think the plot is good, and I'm excited to see what happens next. The storyline is well-structured, and it never failed to pique my curiosity about what would happen next.