First and foremost, for those curious, this isn't an ordinary harem story. The protagonist gradually assumes a protective role towards the girls, while finding his true love beyond his close circle of friends. He's quite transparent about his feelings, which I personally appreciate. Initially, "Death March" had a rocky start, and I was disappointed with the MC's actions in some parts. However, I'm glad I persevered and stuck with it for the sake of the other characters. In the end, it was worth my time, despite some criticisms. The book shines in its diversity and intricate world-building.
The main strength of "Death March" lies in its variety. Even excellent novels can fall short in character differentiation, but this series stands out. The slice-of-life aspect is prominent, but it doesn't limit the storytelling. It avoids generic descriptions, providing engaging details that bring the characters and situations to life. For instance, instead of vague statements like "too much paperwork," the author provides specific scenarios, making the narrative more compelling.
Throughout the story, the protagonists' adventures, interactions, and exploration of different lands and cultures keep the reader engaged. There's always something happening, whether it's learning, crafting, or personal growth. The supporting characters are diverse, with well-rounded development, even if some are one-dimensional. The novel avoids clichés by having some antagonists accept defeat without resorting to typical tropes.
A spoiler follows:
- Lisa evolves from a shamed slave to a strong, independent warrior with her own code of honor, but also develops a sense of pride that can lead to arrogance. Her unwavering determination is inspiring.
- Tama and Pochi, though still children, grow and find new interests, deepening their connections with others.
- Arisa remains consistently entertaining.
- Lulu undergoes a significant transformation, gaining confidence and detachment from her past struggles, which can be both surprising and intriguing.
- Mia, while less engaging, adds a lighthearted touch with her magical abilities and occasional meddling.
- Nana's newfound maternal instincts provide depth and humor.
World-building is the novel's core, creating a vast and ancient world that feels immersive. Details are gradually revealed, making everything connected to the main character's journey meaningful. Events from before his arrival have lasting implications, and minor characters play significant roles in the story's progression, enriching the overall experience.
Several instances come to mind where foreshadowing pays off later:
- MC learns about Lisa's enslavement early on, which has a significant impact later.
- Confusion with the Hero is introduced early, but澄清 occurs much later with other similar characters.
- A seemingly insignificant item purchased at a market turns out to have a crucial role in a later plot point.
- The conflict between the local lord and kobolds is mentioned before becoming a major arc.
- The divine aspects of the world are hinted at early on and explored more thoroughly later.
In conclusion, for those seeking an immersive isekai experience with rich world-building, "Death March" is a fantastic choice. The initial chapters may be challenging, but the improvement is substantial, making it worth the investment. If you're a fan of escapism and intricate storytelling, I wholeheartedly recommend it. Just remember to push through the beginning for the full reward.
Really enjoyed this. I binged through all available chapters and even bought the author's patreon to read ahead.
This story doesn't do anything groundbreaking. The writing is simple, and my jaw was really never on the floor at any moments compared to some of the other higher rated works, so looking back I wonder why I was unable to put this book down.
I think a lot it has do with the pacing. Every chapter has a good sense of progression and the exposition is minimal. It is a slice of life, but there is still a good sense of progression. The fights are short and sweet. Arcs don't overstay their welcome. There is very little character drama, which keeps the focus on the MC and the quick pacing.
This feels like it was written for long term litrpg/cultivation readers who are starting to get sick of the genre. It just feels like a nice break from all the world ending high stakes, lengthy expositions, melodramatic characters, and other things that can drag down this genre sometimes.
(つ°ヮ°)つ guys is this goo- Oh, sorry.
*Ahem*
My fellow Daoists! I come here to ask you all one meager question. Is this novel good?
Yes, this question has been asked many a time, but it is our duty to answer them! We are the poison testers! We are the vanguard! We are the front line!
A Daoist must reply! Whether it is good or it is bad, is not the question! It is merely the answer!
So! Fellow Daoists! Is it really as boring as they say? I must confirm with you!
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(Edit: After much deliberation, as my boredom finally overcame my laziness, I have read up to chapter 5. With all my heart, I say: this novel is the same feeling of waiting in line in a Pharmacy.)
Author has dropped this novel and started writing a new novel
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Title: mysteries of immortal puppet master
Not sure if anyone else picked up on it but, he didn't get away with it. Sure he didn't get arrested but, he didn't get away with it either.
I don't know why but only with the tags and the summary, I got goosebumps
Can someone spoil me how many girls will mc end up with i will ready if it's less than 5
gods and demi gods, interesting stuff and i can see its heavy on emotional side too.
Author here. this book is one of my craziest idea yet. this journey would be filled with a lot of dangerous journeys... Harem... evolution... action... Smut... I Said
SMUT! just in moderation at least. Thanks for joining me on this journey.
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
this story is amazing, from the quick witted and intelligent mc to the character devlopment of the different characters. you should totally read it if you see this. also, does anyone mind if they can take the time to find the chapters with illustrations in it and comment here? thanks.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwNuts this junior has exposed the senior, i cant even call myself a senior anymore...