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i have been waiting for more of these space mercenary novels, and this definitely is a good read as of now, at least for me it has everything I hoped for. thx author I hope it gets more updates ??
I've never seen a novel with this kind of theme. It's really exciting.The text is beautiful, the words are skillful, and the plot is fascinating.
Beautiful Genre. The story is well written
Thank you Author for uploading all of these chapters, this novel one of the best for those doesn't get what the f*** is going in the current manhwa or for someone who wants to explore in depth which is great.If I have to describe MC abilities in the novel as because of him being a mercenary he is "Jack of all trades,master of none" where he has a general idea of things but not in-depth knowledge about it. With his speciality(in which he excels the most or particularly best at)being, if described in one word is "warfare".
Just another shameless author giving his book a review. please I hope you enjoy!....
nice work keep going I'll just reviewing it
After reading this story up to chapter 72, all I can say is that it’s good. The flow of the story is easy to understand, and the main character is refreshing. The dialogue is also well done. This is my favorite book so far. Keep up the good work, and I hope this book continues to be as enjoyable ??
I already love this when I see the character design dang bruh got cartel soldier and btw is the on same earth like irl or alternate ? anyway don't drop this man
elbow grease means hard work
I’ll start off by saying I’m not a regular reader of the genre so I can’t compare it to other works, but I can say I found it to be an enjoyable read and will focus on the opening chapters. I liked how the MC’s characterization was done by showing his swift decision making and improvisation in the opening action sequence, accompanied by dialogues by other characters about him rather than use of a long internal monologue to expose his character.It has an action packed opening sequence which is gripping, but it might feel a tad long for some readers. If you are a fan of the action genre though, I can imagine this could be a plus rather than minus. As for the language, it is written in concise and clear sentences with hint of humor that comes across in MC’s narration during the fight which conveys more of an amusement than panic. The simple and direct tone of the narration is something I personally like myself, but it might feel a bit short of depth for readers who prefer more complex and nuanced writing style. One thing I can say though is that being simplistic does not equate to omission of necessary details here as you will never feel that the visualisation is lacking due to details it leaves out, i.e., what’s happening in the scenes are clearly delivered and never confusing. The basic world building is established to some extent through the action sequence rather than an exposition dump, so that was good because you get to see the variety of the MC’s power right from the start, and the fight with the mecha quickly establishes that it is a world that combines futuristic and high-tech era with fantasy element of magic like super powers coexisting. My only concern is that the opening chapters might be a hit or miss in general, as some readers who want more insightful exposition of the world and the lore early on might get impatient while those who like a slow build up would appreciate it. Overall, I think this is a work with potential that is worth giving a go. Good job!
It’s good but only tsords the end since mc is getting revenge
Best of luck to our new author. May he succeed in creating a great novel. .. ... . ... .. .. ...zh. ...eh .. ........ . . . e szhz h s h hze eh eeh
