Typical wish fulfillment. I like the slower pace the author is using. Although it seems like i'm reading a slice of life and nothing really OP yet. Its pretty good. Clearly a novice, given how it lacks structure. But i'll be keeping my eye on it
"There comes a point where you have to ask yourself how much more of your soul you're willing to let the masses devour. How little remaining self can you learn to live without? Seems like you came here to expand yourself to connect to others, to erase the lines that keep us all separate but they came to tear little pieces off of you and compete over who had the biggest, brightest, prettiest piece. When they are done and they scatter off to the next person they will dismantle you for entertainment, you stand in silence and look at the pieces of you they've ripped away just lying on the ground and they are unrecognizable. They are no longer a part of you. You felt like a cold isolated absence when they've all gone away. It gets lonely so you read the feedback to get closer to them. They all circle around to spit venom about how inadequate you are. You gave them everything, they took it and then they'd decided you are nothing. No individual could devour you whole."
Better than most originals I have read so far Keep up the good work brother. :(:):):(:(:):(:)——————————————————////———-//________________________
there will always be plot armor in stories but the bad start that introduced the plot armor and then added more plot armor right away just made it worst let start with the make me a god wish (but what powers does that bring) is this fantasy or historical fiction, then we have knowledge of all things wish ( that is so vague and overpowered for a god that supposedly lost) what year did he die is important information i might of missed it not sure does he literally know everything?? hypnotism?! that is horrible plot armor for these type of novels you might as well just skipped to hes 12 if you want to deal with personality of maturity changes. all of this is my opinion and i can see you put alot of effort into the story by the number of chapters written and i want to tough it out till atleast chapter 20 but the first 5 chapters have just turned me off and the im a god thing partnered with the hypnotism is too much.
Your story is well written, it has great pace, i like your world background and Raiden, to be honest i am not a big fan of horror or so but your story is great and deserves the five star and your plot is amazing, i will keep reading. Good work author.
Story was quite good until 80+ chapters. After that, MC started to develop complex of god and author started to cover loopholes in story.In this novel was stated that this world is real and MC was believing in it, but, at some point, he started to treat NPC just as XP and after some analyzes, I believe he has quite serious mental issues.Some readers believe that officers are "arrogant idiot
It's almost perfect cultivation novel. Really. You can't find anything better. MC is intelligent, strong but not OP. Pacing is good. The only bad thing is that every time i read it i feel like some drug addict, wanting more and more.
literally time waste!!very slow pace novel
loving the beginninglooking forward for more of it
the chapter is Amazing ... ...
....cant wait!
Amazing series