In my opinion the romance was a way to fast. The main character forgave her \\"mate\\" also too fast and the story plot was a bit too simple. I mean the story could have so much potential if there were some challenges in their relationship like no acceptance from his parents or a jealous past lover..etc
Loved the synopsis ❤❤❤?
can't wait to read the story
highly recommended ...️...️
So many name mistakes and grammar mistakes. Hard to follow at times. Not worth the read in my opinion. Reading it in English, maybe it was meant to be read in a different language with all the inconsistencies and errors. Gets confusing at times.
Waiting for the next chapt aweee?
Amber Curt is so me ...
I really love this ...️
Keep it up
It was really a pleasant read. I love HEA, and I truly enjoy when Claire’s story is included too. Thanks for a good novel.
I'm dead serious when I say that I love Kourtney's last name. lol. "Devaraux." I dig it! This book is really entertaining!
very nice keep it up sis
This is essentially a wish-fulfillment novel where the main character (MC) is overpowered, and every woman adores him simply because he exists.
The world-building is practically non-existent. The author shifts between realistic and fantasy settings as it suits him. For instance, during a stock market incident, the MC makes an unrealistic amount of money in a single day with no effort, and the author’s explanation is that he made it unrealistic to make the MC seem cool and garner praise.
Regarding the MC's abilities, there’s not much to discuss. He’s overpowered for the sake of being overpowered. He can acquire any ability he desires whenever he wants, and there’s no point in abilities having different levels because he can instantly max them out.
As for the MC’s personality, there’s not much to commend. He’s a complete scoundrel, and not in the way that makes you think, "He’s a scoundrel, but he’s really badass, so it’s okay." His objectification of women is excessive.
The female characters in this novel are particularly pitiful, as they are often forced to choose between the trashy MC with plot armor and the original, incompetent trashy MC who is always framed by the protagonist. The MC isn’t the smartest character, which indicates the low intelligence level of the other characters. However, the portrayal of the female characters is especially problematic:
- One character has a trauma and is afraid of men, so the MC uses her trauma to make her feel like she is the problem, in order to "tame" her and make her obedient to him.
- Another girl is bought with money, implying that wealth can buy affection.
- One character is bland and, for some reason, the only one the MC treats with respect.
- A particularly concerning character is an underage girl, around 16 years old, who acts like a ten-year-old and falls for the MC at first sight. Initially, the MC says he won’t date an underage girl, but then he decides to pursue her mother instead. The mother is a married woman with a child, yet she is inexplicably a virgin, which is conveniently convenient for the plot.
To sum it up, this novel is likely not worth your time.
I really enjoyed this novel; it’s my first time diving into a sports BL that isn’t about e-sports, and it had me hooked from the start. The sprinting and hurdles events were thrilling, making my heart race with every development in the story. I appreciate how the author meticulously describes the rules, the experience of running and hurdling, and the sportsmanship among the athletes. Su Zhe's growth is deeply detailed, showing how he dedicates countless hours to training in the system's training room to fine-tune his skills.
However, the romance aspect is a bit troubling. It feels somewhat underdeveloped, especially since the entire novel focuses heavily on the protagonist's journey. The romantic subplot moves quite quickly, with the main love interest (ML) always showing up at key events, taking photos of the main character (MC), but without much physical interaction unless they coincidentally meet. Their relationship only becomes clear in the final arc of the track and field storyline.
My favorite character is definitely the Jamaican player Holness (or maybe Holiness? I’m not sure, I just translated it roughly). His mannerisms make you feel like he’s truly a wild tiger, which is both amusing and engaging. Interestingly, when he meets the MC, they form a team called "Dwarf King," and Holness becomes one of the MC's strongest rivals in hurdles, even in his second life.
**Spoiler**
When the ML is reborn, he immediately goes to the MC's house and hugs him, only to be discovered by the MC's mother, which is quite hilarious. The ML takes advantage of opportunities he missed in his past life, aiming to build a stable career so he can openly declare his relationship with the MC.
**Spoiler**
The MC tries running with his brother and accidentally reveals his talent, leading his father to push him into athletics after he sets a record of 10:13. After several ice skating tournaments, the MC retires due to reaching a height of 180 cm and refocuses on running. Eventually, his father becomes suspicious of his extraordinary abilities, and the MC confesses to both his parents that he has been reborn along with his lover, the former film emperor (ML).
**Spoiler**
The story spans three worlds: the Track and Field world (the real world), the Ice Figure Skating world (where the MC and ML fulfill their past regrets and missed opportunities in their second rebirths), and the Entertainment World (an alternative path where the MC continues his idol career instead of becoming an athlete).
Maybe try journey of the fate destroying emperor(read at least 700 chaps if you want to drop it early on) , outside of time ( I would say up there with fang yuan at like 700 chaps), paragon of sin ( I dropped it but is good) and I guess maybe emperor domination and lastly Cryhsalis( not sure if i wrote it right and it is the goat ngl and nonhuman mc)