DemonOfHopeless
nice story but im looking forward to read its ending
A missing groom yet you love him. I pray that he redeemed. Kudo writer
Im intrigued by all of the characters. Good novel story!
The premise begins intriguingly, but the story already shows signs of weakness. It’s an isekai where the protagonist, an ordinary individual, is reincarnated after dedicating his life to mastering his craft. His passion for practice is genuinely commendable and makes for a strong backstory for a main character in this genre. However, the issue lies in the lack of depth among the characters. The prologue portrays the protagonist as an introverted and single-minded individual devoted to his craft, but what you get is a chatty teenager who constantly complains about being "untalented." The other characters seem to exist solely to highlight the main character’s superiority, which is quite off-putting. It’s still early in the story, so there’s hope that the author will develop the characters further. The foundation is promising, but there’s not much substance yet.
At first glance, the story's synopsis appears rather formulaic, but appearances can be deceiving. The author has an uncanny ability to transform a common storyline into a literary gem. Although the narrative is straightforward, the execution is exceptional, allowing readers to deeply connect with the characters and their relationships throughout the tale. Each heroine boasts a unique personality, avoiding any sense of redundancy among them. The main character, or MC, stands out as the perfect finishing touch.
The pacing issue I have is the slow translation speed; it seems unlikely to reach completion anytime soon. Let's remain hopeful for a positive outcome.
The portrayal of the main character (MC) in the story is highly problematic. He seems to possess inexplicable overpowers that defy logic:
1. Despite having no prior life experiences involving extreme danger, the MC maintains an unnaturally calm demeanor during life-threatening situations.
2. Despite his lack of training in his past life, his current weak and malnourished body defies expectations, as he effortlessly evades a skilled knight's sword without using any magical abilities (which he conveniently acquires solely to boost his power).
In this novel, the world is depicted as highly unfair, with everyone else portrayed as utterly incompetent, while the MC appears to be a divine reincarnation – not just of Jesus, but also of Chuck Norris, granting him unparalleled abilities to achieve his goals. Once these "bad" characters are miraculously saved (through the intervention of, let's say, Jesus *ahem* MC), they inexplicably shower him with love and devotion.
Mc in my language is short form for m*th*r f*ck*r
research purposes ofcourse... ofcourse, nothing else...
I pretty sure that the name was the chronicles of the fallen world or something like that.
Swag messiah
No explanation was given. It is unknown when the new season will start.
They haven’t updated in 8 months?
