This book is the example of good ideas, but poor choices. You can clearly notice when the author switched from good writing to just pure s*x and dirty/lowkey s*xist jokes. However, chapter 741. I can overlook and cringe at edgy 13 year old humour, but what the author writes is borderline r*pe of the main character. His best friends get him seriously dr*nk, and the girl that had a crush on him for 'years' (An example of another forgetten storyline from chapters ~400) takes him to a bed. She when cl*mbs and makes red marks on the bed to suggest that they had s*x and guilt trips him next morning to have s*x again. This is not cute, and as someone that had a similar experience, the least the author could had done is given a trigger warning. I even wonder how webnovel would allow something like this on their site.
The quality isnt the greatest but its not like the authors getting paid they dont allow powerstones and even if they did I wouldnt be mad. Despite the translation I like the story.
Story is trash translater does a good job bit that cant fox a ad story with a very stupid mc it goes something like this oh I only have a few strands of this certain qi that is hard to cultivate let's waste it but smashing up my yard and house hello you learned this from a dream go back to sleep learn more or cultivate oh no the maids in trouble random agree to a debt cause of his stupidity
Nice work, not good as Blue Phoenix though. But Condemning the Heavens has its own charm when reading further chapters. Still better than Overthrowing Fate.
hmmmm. a bit boring but i like the cheat and its still early so im gonna follow it for now.............................................................................
The main reason I gave this novel such a low rating is that the author seems to constantly forget about previous things that YY has learned and/or characters that contribute to his power ups.One key example is his aspect totem, the 9 neonate. It is supposed to grow along with YY since it is a "beast mark of life" which allowed it to go through a heavenly tribulation back in the Tian Yuan world. However, nothing has happened to it since then. YY has grown multiple realms (nearly 4 full realms if I'm not wrong), but the 9 neo is still at the 1st tribulation which doesn't make any sense. He has eaten how many high level resources and nothing made it go through the 2nd tribulation? I call BS.Another example is the godly OP bow he received from the God Advent Tower spirit. From what I remember, it was made from divine beast parts which is on the same level of his 3-legged golden crow(don't quote me on this, didn't feel like re-reading that whole arc for this review). YY could use around 5-10% of its power when he was at the yuan opening realm(again, don't quote me on that), but he has never even touched the bow since leaving the Tian Yuan world. It's almost safe to assume that the author completely forgot about the bow entirely.Lastly, I gave this novel this rating because the author once said back when this novel used to be on GravityTales that he would flush out the main story within 500-800 chapters. This notice was around chapter 550 or so, but I have yet to see where the main story is supposed to go. I can see that YY will fight with the White Lunar Empire soon and obviously win due to plot armor and 1337 hax, but nothing about what happens from there. There is no big bad enemy at the end of the tunnel, no dark forces watching from the shadows, nothing so much as an inkling of knowledge on who/what YY will be fighting to end the story. I guess you could say that I've been waiting for something to be revealed and yet I feel disappointed every time.You could take my rant/review for a grain of salt, but this is just how I feel about this novel. I've been reading almost since the beginning, and I've just longing for the author to come up with more story telling that doesn't involve near useless random/stepping stone characters.Thanks for your time. :]
I love the novel story development and world building is great and I absolutely love the MC and how well it is written
I definitely loved the story!! And what I loved the most is the part where there is romance between Ruan and Lin!!In addition, the development of the small world is very interesting. Can't wait for more!!!
this rework of an already popular theme and not an original story there is little value in this story .I was hoping for something interesting, was disappointed .?
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This novel is very good I hope to read more of it in the near future of my life. The other reason is that the main character in the novel is also very heroic person to his loved ones, but he is also very wise sometimes on deciding on what to do next after finishing one task after another.
I this this could be one of the greatest web novels created. I love the characters, story, and the overall novel. I think it could go down as one of the greats. The web toon will probably be even better than the novel.