Another rebirth, another movie star... WB we need newer themes...this has become norm here always rebirth and movie star! Can't find another topic for a novel? So boring now! How many?Cliche topic, only 3 star!
My teacher left me once we got to a restaurant-something about an old favour-and I ordered a drink while we waited.
/"You do a lot of that."/
Legend of the Supreme Soldier is honestly an amazing book and one of my favorite books tho read, as I have a hard time switching to another book and/or moving on to writing my fanfic that’s currently in production (not a shameless plug, I’m just saying that I have a hard time closing the book and moving on to other things that I need to do, like writing the fanfic.). To keep this short, I’ll just say that it’s an amazing book that was translated well and has an amazing story. Overall, I sincerely recommend this book and can not wait to finish it.
I am such a big fan so far!!!! I cannot wait to hear what happens next. I’m so intrigued as to who the mysterious “I” character is that we keep getting small glimpses of!!! The writing could use some work and it is clear that the author is new, but so far I am loving how unique and LGBtQ friendly the story is.
I'm reviewing my novel because I think it has a lot of potential
Great comic way to go and keep up the good work. I also i checked your Fandom. It definitely needs more work. glad you are writing and keep going
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system slave. if he doesn't do what the system says he loses all his progress.
I like the Story very much. It has a nice character development, a plot that makes sense and doesn't feel forced. A nice World Background, though we don't know that much about other nations till now (chap 200), not that that's a particularly bad point, just an observation. The characters are humorous though not too clichéd and take situations appropriately serious. The plot Armour isn't too bad......if there is one point to criticize the it is the time progression and the mcs age. He is simply too mature and knowledgeable for a 14 year old, 1 year academy student. It wouldn't have hurt the plot to slow down a bit and have the mc age more. When it comes to grammar, there are very few mistakes, all said.To sum together: Nice novel with the singular flow of the age of the mc (which isn't that important to me), though should the time flow not speed xup it could get awkward.
sometimes makes mistakes in the spelling of a word or misses words to form a proper sentence,good story development so far but wish main character had a disguise technique cause it would be convenient now and in the future just in case someone sees him and i wish the main character would slaughter people more,he world background hasn't been that thoroughly explained yet
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