ahhhh I really fell in love with this novel.keep it up
yeah I could completely see where this novel will develop.From it's name I thought that it could have had a lot of potential but sometimes MC's background matters more than a interesting power.This man is probably around 30 with a daughter.This novel is more about a cute girl journeying with her father going around the cultivation world than a man getting a power in cruel cultivation world.Its end is clear I have no hope for this novel.I don't why this novel is on trial read I think the webnovel deteriorating.
50 chapters inno problems with the writing easy to read and the mistakes there is aren't a big deal as there not often. Over all the story is fine but at same time many forced situations and from my initial thoughts on what the story would be from the description of a mc that has to pave his own way in cultivation no matter how stacked against the odds thing are against him with his background and cultivation talent have to say he's had things being pretty convient the whole time. For some reason author has made the concept of strength a cultivator should have at each stage come off pointless. Just makes everything seem completely forced when you have the mc who still at the first tier in cukvation being able to inflict wounds or now even kill someone multiple tiers above his level. Even if the excuse is they were tired I don't see it working why because even a tired body builder is still going to be stronger then a average person, a tired long distance runner is still going to be able to out run a average person. Let alone people that should be hundreds of times stronger then the mc and having abilities like spiritual sense and experienced many years of battle compared to the mc who's still new to all of this. World background honestly is lack luster I don't expect to know of higher worlds or other kingdoms by now but at least give the places the mc is at sense of existence. Descriptions on the size of the location, what's there what it looks like and the people and what there doing. This is good filler and at same time as long as done right meaning full filler because it fleshes out the world the mc is at. The Author deserves praise on the upload rate very rare see a author put out 14 chapters a week when so many struggle to just put out 1.
The Storyline is FASCINATING. I Can't Able To Stop myself from Reading it. (But well, had to pause when I remembered my study work.) But this Novel is Really Truly Great. I'm Looking forward to it. Really Great. Great Work Author. I Love it!
You can be sure that this "novel" will be chosen after all is simple and pure propaganda
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This is actually a good premise, but the execution is just horrible. Either the translator skipped paragraphs, or the author doesn't feel the need to explain or plan anything properly.
Examples:
-MC transfers 1-3 days of cultivation every day, despite receiving multiple days of cultivation each time. We could say he cannot transfer the cultivation given by the system, but that means he can only transfer 1 day since technically he gave away the previous day's cultivation.
- Pick a hard technique because the longer it takes to cultivate the better. Huh? Why?
- Since he only gives the pet 1-3 days of cultivation at a time, it should be impossible for his pet to keep up with him, since he gets much more in return. Yet, their levels are synced.
- MC reaches bottleneck and needs combat to breakthrough. How much combat? 1 fight...
All interactions in the school are just 1 badly done cliché after another. So monotonous and uninspiring that you might as well just skip it.
I wish another author copied this theme and did a good job with it.
I like the novel very much, waiting for more and hoping you don't drop it.
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Looking good, Author! Really funny story so far. The MC's internal thoughts are fun to read, and the supporting cast is growing nicely. Keep it up!
raw link plz
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I don't know if my review on my book is still up or not. It shows up for me but not when I log out so I'll try to leave another one.
Welcome to another yuri filled journey and hope to see you all enjoy this as much as I'm enjoying writing this.
It's sad that I won't be able to know u less you either vote with power stones , leave a comment or a review (i expect you to do that to let me know you are there)
Rest, i'll come back for later.
Wow, what an amazing story. I particularly love the story line. The synopsis it self is interesting. The dialogue is captivating, I simply love the story. Good job author, keep on!!