Its just too sad
They sure haber a los of earthly food for being diferent societies
Moreeee
it is OK
Thanks for the updates.
I'ts has been killed by 'subaru'
Gave a full marks review is because I haven't read all of the chapter[img=faceslap]. But I might collect the book first, then it will be more fun to read when there are more chapters.
Come on, author, keep writing. Try to write as many Noah and Charlotte love stories as possible. (I used to read romance novels on other platforms)
After reading everything till here i would like to say a few words. I like the setting and the fact that you will soon start the game world, i like the smut and the progression so far.
What i didn't like about the history is the beggning, i can say that i would change the order of some chapters and for me would make more sense. Keep going
Hope it not going to take long for them to kiss? Yet to get that that flfb.. and I also hope she’s the real daughter
Love it, but I loved the 25th_Chestnut translations more, they had a really high quality, you could almost feel the work behind every little detail... and although the quality was the best the releases were not slow. I can’t believe that Qidian had to stop someone doing such an amazing work... and for free!
****************************************pls speed up the updates****************************************************************************
So this has some huge amazing upside as a fanfic. Its an amazing story about an op player who is white which is awesome as you dont see alot of all around dominant white players when u talk greates its MJ labron kobe. But thier are now glaring plot wholes coming. one is instead of having to fight players hes having to fight refs who are allowing him to get hit with flagrant fouls. That would not happen NBA wouldnt allow it. if he got a carrer ending injury that would mean losses of millions if not billions of dollars in potential revenue. Not only that but it would also mean he can sue for hostile work invironment i mean the NBA is his employer and they are allowing him to possibly get injured. thier are smaller mistskes like NYU not having a D1 gymnastics team. his girl should have gone to cornell that does have a good school and D1 gymnastics. I havent heard him mention the players union or anything.