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How do you go and decide to battle against the god of systems since you are clearly weaker then him???
Another thing since he did all that because of his previous hosts that will mean he has emotions
How did he not feel a thing when all his powers are taken and he fell from grace?
Thirteen's transition from a powerful system to a vulnerable mortal is a significant change, yet his emotional response to this drastic change is like nothing happened
Or should I say not explored? ?( Thirteen is a weird *ss name too)?
And how does a intelligent being be like a 16yr old hot headed challenging his fellow systems ?
For example
It's like me a human standing up for ants
Anyways couldn't pass chapter 5
Thanku you good man
website sometimes refreshes every few days later for some reason so you might need to wait a week or so, even the novel updates are late compared to other website :p
Was looking for solo max level newbie. Looks like that's not the one.
Why is the plot is so slow?
actually did you know the author actually contacted me because he wanted to get a reference to create ayanokoji
Love the story.. its light read and very nice romance, very well written, very nice charachter development.. overall 10/10 ?
Can anyone recommend anything like this?
D*mn should have gone for 69 ?
In my personal experience, this particular story didn't resonate with me. I actually found the male lead quite problematic, with red flags indicating toxicity. Unlike previous novels, I didn't perceive the main character as overly toxic in this one. Instead, I thought his behavior was childish and pathetic, lacking strength, which led to his own downfall. Frankly, I believe he got what he deserved due to his actions. Among all the SQC novels, this one stands out as the least appealing to me. The only reason I'm giving it a rating of 2 is for the writing style and the male lead, despite the overall disappointment.
It appears to be written above average, but despite the initial claim of being against it, I didn't anticipate the early chapters. The main character seems to deceive himself, pretending to be dependable and composed around the female lead (ML), but his demeanor changes drastically when it comes to her. I couldn't continue reading after the 14th chapter, as I understand his attraction towards ML due to their shared history - he assisted the MC with a difficult issue three years prior, and ML is both attractive and wealthy. It's understandable that he might have feelings.
However, he's well aware of the circumstances he's in, yet still holds onto faint emotions and the fleeting kindness from ML. They're in a contract-bound relationship with a clearly defined end date. It feels out of character for him to angst over ML's indifference, considering he agreed to the terms that led to this. His longing creates unnecessary heartache. I'd prefer if he remained indifferent at the start, allowing their relationship to unfold naturally. But no, he chooses to pine away, lowering himself and devaluing himself due to the choices he made. It's quite peculiar that he entered into a 'mutually beneficial' arrangement, willingly providing financial support in exchange for ML's protection, without feeling coerced.
I can hardly fathom how I devoted time to this. At best, it's unimpressive, and most of it feels forced. This would be your go-to for mindless entertainment. The repetitive focus on the characters' shyness—MC blushing and ML with red ears—it's almost comical. The author keeps reminding us that this is the central theme, but honestly, it's a clichéd重生故事: abandoned baby, a contrasting bio-family gone wild, a supportive adoptive family, high school achievements with the top rank, likable MC adored by all, and an omnipotent ML with wealth and power. It's a mishmash of overused tropes without much substance. Not interested in side plots, I'll stop here with the main storyline.
Me when I read the title
