This is a good piece, look forward to read it some more.
It looks promising, pacing can be increase more but I personally like slow story building, keeps us link to characters more. I am looking forward to reading more about Ravian story, I am more interested in him than the MC ?
Love it!! keep it up author??????????? sarahaeyor ???????????????????
This book is average at best.The pros :- The translation is ok - The characters are interesting- The interactions are entertainingThe pros :- The chapters are too short.Each chapter is so short that it feels like nothing substential happens in the story.- The story is too long.Seriously? 1100 + chapters and the book is still ongoing? A slice of life with over 100 chapters is - most of the time - boring in the long run.And it's the case here. So many unnecessary events( confrontations with the neighbours and other people) stretch the story . Plus, it becomes quickly repetitive.- The antagonists.They are too stupid. It's like aside from the Mc's family( counting the Ml as part of the family too), everyone is stupid.This isn’t entertaining at all, as they serve to make the Mc glow up.The ml is also a problem. He is ypur usual ice block. And even by 100~ chapters, we don't know about his motivations for marrying the Mc , and he seems to not have any personality aside from being cold and domeenering.- The pace is slow.As i said , by 100+ chapters , the story is still in it's early stages and this just feels like things are evolving at a snail's speed.All in all , this is your average chinese novel about reincarnation in the 19s.This book doesn't deserves that we spend coins on it.
At the time of this review, there are only 31 chapters. From what has been released so far, I can say a great idea and story. Now with only 30+ chapters there's not been a super ton of plot development. However, what has happened is detailed, thought out, interesting, and enjoyable. The characters are diverse, and realistic. The author is blending sci-fi, fantasy(my opinion), dystopian, supernatural, and cultivation into a piece of art. The only flaw I can see at this time is that the Levels or Ranks are not full defined yet. We get a general view but it is still unclear at this time. I expect as the story progresses that this aspect will become clear, but at this point it is still muddy. This is something that might bother new readers coming into this story. Having said that, it really doesn't matter this early in the story because of everything else that is happening. TRY. If you do anything else just try the story. If you give it a chance you'll find yourself emersed into a captivating world. You have nothing to lose by trying. This author is a incredible story teller that will suck you in and not let go. This is purely my opinion. Try and decide for yourself if it is worth it or not. Thanks for giving us this gift of a story.
Absolutely amazing read. If you get through the massive first chapter!!! Loved your character building and your world building.Really looking forward to reading more, I would definitely stick with it, the spelling, grammar, and writing are really well done.I would just cut your chapters down to like 1500-2000 words max
Neha:now what????
"Show that crazy kid a lesson!"
After letting Mew go from her death grip she starts practicing the hand signs and starts channeling chakra. Before she can finish I grab her hands to stop her causing her to look at me in displeasure.
Still, by that point he would have enough money to move his family to at least a tier 2 planet, so they would be safe. All in all, life would be good, if slightly stressful, from that point onwards.
Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb
The water's getting warm so you might as well swim