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"We need to talk," I told her. "About everything.
"no but's Marcos, don't tell me you've grown pity towards your daughter? "
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"What now?" I whispered.
"It is the aura of His Majesty." a purple hair female trembles while wiping her tears.
"Oh, sorry."
This novel reminded me of a game called 'i am bread' and lemme tell you this: if you never saw a sentient slice of bread crawling up the walls and riding a skateboard in a jorney to use unortodox metods to become delicious wile a man tries to prove your sentiency......then you're more sane then the game's devs are
"A son you say? It was Sage that made him and he was based on those guys DNA so that the temporary soul would fit. How is he your son?"
It starts very well, but after 30 chapters you already start to feel it getting short of breath, and by the time the premium arrived, I already had no interest while reading this novel anymore, I didn't even read the last free chapter, its base concept is pure genius but the more time passes the more the novel stays in conquered lands without trying to move on, the jokes are not changed, there is almost no evolution, and despite the plot advancing it feels like it doesn't, it would've been my favorite novel if the author had as much imagination as the first few chapters for the rest of the novel
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Yumina blinked. Wait that sounded a little dirty somehow. She didn't know why though.
Very good start to the book but cannot give a more thorough review without more chapters
