This series is back. And as I said earlier as well, it's a great and refreshing read if you're sick of the usual cultivation stories full of Chinese propaganda...
It's literally the only webnovel that I've actually paid for (only because I thought it was gone forever from WN)
Considering everything, it'll probably take a month or so before I can begin reading this again since I'd already started off with the paid version... (While the paid version is 40 chapters ahead, this one has real people joking and reacting to the story)
If you don't try it, you'll be missing out on a lot...
I love harem novels and your novel is close to first place to me
4 chapter in, and I see sign of ntr
Author intentionally create a lucky pervert moment between a potential harem member with a random guy, and the MC just treat everyone as an NPC, so he doesn't even bother about it.
The guy while trying to save the girl, somehow undress her pant, and panties, got to see it all in full glory, and the MC who act like a system of the girl just laugh.
This plot is completely unnecessary and to me, it a sign of the girl not gonna be in the mc harem.
It feel wrong, since in the synopsis give the impression that, the mc will build a harem, base on the girl that he reincarnated.
This is just 4 chapter in, so I won't consider it as much of a spoiler, just want to ask, if my gut is correct on this one?
it feels like the novel is being held back greatly by the horrible grammar and I mean greatly. the conversations are so out of touch it makes my head hurt and you don't even know the difference between what they're thinking or saying, its all just mixed up in there
this book is amazing as of rn. there are many things he could do but tbh its pretty good i wouldnt mind if he didnt explain the people a bit deeper in the future though.
Please continue this novel please continue this novel
I really like stories like this, I hope you have more frequent updates from now on, thanks for the hard work to the author, translator and editor, and everyone involved.
I love romance....I knew I would definitely enjoy this book for sure. Good job author, I didn't plan to read it but the book cover is just so attractive.
In this story, the author will share his thoughts about his other novels, where to send, where to turn the story, thoughts about writing stories. What to do when the lines passed? 500 - 10000-50000-100000 words? This is a good marketing ploy so that a beginner author would like to write further, there was some sort of incentive. And then enter this track and write further, this is a fascinating activity.
At the same time, apparently, it is necessary to improve the grammar ... there is much to strive for and to grow.
It is interesting for 1 month, 3 months, 6 months, 12 months, how many people will see the work? How many will subscribe or unsubscribe?
Maybe finally there will be a new story from another author dedicated to the Silk Road?
This is all very entertaining!
Many thanks to the authors of this site!
You can be not only a reader, but also an author, this process is no less fascinating
This story feels generic, and the story so far is cliche. However, cliche isn't necessarily bad. So far, the plot reads like most fantasy isekai. Same tropes that can be found in stories like this.
The main characters and world are nothing to write home about, but I'm sure with enough time they will develop.
However, I appreciate the fact that its LitRPG element isn't too prevalent like many other stories and their "systems". Those can be jarring for the readers, reading numbers upon numbers between paragraphs. The pacing is decent thay it is not too slow nor too fast; just right for this kind of story.
There are many minor grammar mistakes, such as lack of periods in some sentences and some non-noun words that are capitalized. I dislike the use of omatopoeias in between paragraphs, but it is my personal preference more than anything. Word choice and descriptions leads to be desired.
I also applaud the story's constant and stable updates, which keeps the story alive.
However, with enough time, I think this story will improve.
It was an OK novel and I wish you would post more, but sadly I think you have given up on this novel! Good by author! I need a bit more. A little more.
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