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this is the first time in a while that I've been hooked into reading a book. So far it's been such a good and exciting read, I recommend it to anyone who loves a good story line.
when is the next update?
156 chapters 9-1-24
An almost identical situation to "Is there anything wrong with Alpha marking Alpha." Not that there's anything wrong with that.
We have the big guy Alpha, though in this case, our main character (MC) isn't good at studying, lol. Both are poor, but here, our MC isn't that good at fighting and instead spends his time live-streaming for money. The new kid, a machine learning (ML) transfer from a big city, becomes his deskmate, and of course, the ML is the same height as the MC, strong, and a top student. Both the MC and ML have traumatic or painful pasts and are dealing with the repercussions, which gives them opportunities to comfort each other during their darkest times.
This story uses the trope of the MC having Omega insensitivity syndrome, and the two of them suddenly developing some sort of Alpha compatibility syndrome, forcing them to stay close. This leads to two people who inexplicably became enemies because the ML didn't like the MC's pheromones to interact more closely. To add to the mix, the ML randomly becomes the MC's neighbor.
The ML has been through a lot. His so-called parents are actual villains, and it's hard to imagine how he managed to survive the abuse he endured. Fortunately, he meets the MC, a ball of sunshine who also struggles with major depression. The journey to getting together is quite rough, though. Our MC is very much a straight man and repeatedly denies his feelings, making it obvious to everyone else but himself. However, when he finally opens his eyes, he shows no shame in openly clinging to and expressing his love, which somewhat makes up for his past denials.
, it's a standard coming-of-age love story between two Alphas. Cute but nothing too groundbreaking.
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so how is it?
this was my first light novel if I'm not mistaken. I finished this a few years ago. got hit with nostalgia randomly of this and felt the urge to dive back in to this epic journey. see you in the comment section!
Just binged this in the last 2 days, it's good. I gave it a 5/5 review when it gets approved.
It’s always the “carefree” characters that make me cringe
The mc is only thinks with his third leg and don't even get me started with the idiot "one look=fall in love" girls! Good read if you can filter away some of the boring acts but that obviously uses a lot of brain cells
I couldn't continue reading due to the repetitive nature of the content. The author constantly repeats the same themes, making it monotonous. The main character (MC) is destined to rise to fame, while the main love interest (ML) is portrayed as uninteresting. The story revolves around the idea that wealth and power reign supreme, with rich individuals solely indulging in smoking and drinking. It's stated that strength is revered, yet those strong characters are often depicted as struggling in the lower world. This cycle is repeated for 19 chapters without much variation.
The logic doesn't quite hold up – if the upper world values strength above all else, why aren't the strongest individuals in charge? The explanation given is that they gain their prowess through a 'killing game,' but their growth is minimal, and they merely kill. The supporting characters are portrayed shallowly, and when they die, the author dismisses them as mere plot devices.
The lack of significant obstacles or meaningful challenges for the MC is disappointing, considering the author's early emphasis on their starring role. The journey promised potential, but it turns out to be formulaic and clichéd, reminiscent of a poor adaptation of "The Hunger Games."
Death is treated rather casually in the narrative, with little graphic detail. Torture is mentioned vaguely, leaving the reader to imagine the scene. In one instance, a character tortures another during an Easter egg plot, but the author doesn't delve deeper, leaving readers uncertain about the true nature of the event.
In summary, the repetitive tropes and lack of depth in both character development and plot execution made the book unengaging for me.
If you like & support this novel, you'll support it till the end of your days. If you don't like it, you'll hate it to your bones. Spoiler, there is a lot, and I mean a LOT of sm*t, plus there's sensitive topics like *nc*st, Manipulation, Mindbreak etc. So, if you're a li'l b*tch, don't read it, and don't post hate comments, the Author can't even see it, this ain't even the real novel site. All you're gonna do is spoil the reading experience for others who are actually trying to enjoy it
