This story has a loot of potential the only thing is the story has a very slow update speed. PS NNNNNNNNNNNNeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEd more
It is an overpowered protagonist story but the author manages to keep the story interesting,unlike all the other OP protagonist story’s, keep up the good work work authur.
Good transmigration novel, does the Emperor not notice his "fear" is induced by outsiders (he did not believe the prophecy so later "events" made him believe it...)?... Did he not think higher cultivators than the Kingdom arranged things...?What is the Raw title for this work?
sick characters ,brilliant world building that is nicely spread and not all info dumped at once and good mc.also fig the magic and abilities
The writing is good, updates come often and the background makes sense, although some stuff is hard to understand. What I dont like is firstly, the cliché of the arrogant young masters. I cant seem to escape it no matter what I do. Besides, Its not the Middle Ages anymore. They should be at least a little smart. Thats probably the main reason I left this book. Whenever there are young masters involved, the clichés follow.
noicee but i was wondering when will author did a new update because I am excited to know what happened! i understand the author is busy so take your time!
|| This review will only be limited to volume 2 as I will wait for volume 3 to continue reading.|| Writing Quality [ 3 stars ]: Somehow, the amount of errors got worse in volume 2. It did improve around the middle of the volume but just enough to be on par with volume 1's quality. I hope the author could improve his writing because it is the only reason preventing me from calling it one of the best original story I have ever read.|| Stability of Updates [ 4 stars ]: At the start of the volume, the release rate is a very consistent 2 chap/day. But in the later stages of the volume, it became highly unstable [ 1 chap/2 day -- 4 chap/day ]. It's fine with me since I pretty much binge read the entire volume anyways :)|| Story Development [ 4 stars ]: I thought that the story by volume 1 is interesting but the author never ceases to amaze me as volume 2 brings the story to a whole new level. The few flaws in my opinion are: Ellena is finally getting her much needed time to stabilize her emotions, but she still acts nearly the same as she did before though. The few middle chapters when the time skips happened are especially boring to read. I felt this part could've been better.|| Character Design [ 4 stars ]: The low rating is due to the poor description of the members of the 3rd generation group ( the author did state a reason for this ). In my opinion, introduced characters should always be related to the main story and therefore needed to be described better in order to increase the sense of immersion in the story. Because this lack of description, the scenes they are in became hard to imagine, making the chapter feel bland. The design for the other characters in the story is great though, I can't wait to see more.|| World Background [ 4 stars ]: We're finally introduced to more of the world, though I feel the description for some of the places are a little bit lacking.|| Extra opinion: I might've judged wrongly at some point as I'm very tired at the moment of writing this review due to online school. Anyways, the 'main' plot about demons have finally start to unfold. You should definitely try this story out. Again, I shall wait for volume 3 to complete before reading to avoid cliffhangers :v. || Total score: 3.8 stars
Honest review (Ignore the rating)Also, pin this author.Alright, where should I start?The writing quality is fine. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but it's readable. Updates are perfect and sometimes go on a hiatus but that's fine since all authors do that. The story pace is perfect, though it leans on the accelerated part a bit. The designs of the characters are alright and the world background is gradually explained at a pace you are able to understand.In my opinion, I say this is a great novel. The first few chapters (Probably around 30 chapters) are very meh, but they provide handy information. After that, the story gets better from there.That's pretty much it...Also, the smut chapters are very enjoyable... if you know what I mean...
In all my time, I’ve never quite read a book like this. So many books overpromise and flood there stories with far too many genres and tags that
character or world developement ends up severely lacking. Not here. This is the only book I have ever read to be able to seamlessly and cohesively string together apocalypse, dungeons, clans, abilities, and steady developement etc and still have an amazingly gripping storyline. The MC is lovestricken but still has the readers rooting for him, and still presents a highly admirable and powerful persona. The ideas the author presents ARE NOT GENERIC. I feel like I speak for everyone when I say we see far too many dungeon and apacolypse stories that all seem poorly thought out and borderline plagiarism on this app. Its like a breath of fresh air to see romance and apocalypse and dungeons presented in a way that I have yet to see anywhere else at such a high level. Author all I can say is thank you and keep up the incredible work. ;)
P.S. the only reason for not having a full 5 star review is that we are still discovering the world and therefore not all has been revealed. I also feel like if I’m more honest and realistic the book will gain more traction than with shameless and reasonless 5 star reviews.
generic trash novel. downloaded this because i was going to a remote area just to read a nonsense, unexciting, full of **it novel. waste of time.
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personally i feel that this novel has its own uniqueness to it. there are few books with this genre and the layout of the plot is well done.
the characters are fleshed out and have personalities. the interactions between characters are smooth and have no feelings of rigidness of a script or forced convos to continue the plot.
its a bit slow in terms of plot progression but it keeps itself paced.
i would reccomend the novel for good leisure read. would i say its great?....maybe.....maybe. it has potential but I'll have to wait till ch.100 to decide that. (author, when you reach 100, do remind me to edit this review)
all in all its solid with no plot holes or overly used cliches.