This novel is pretty good.Author, kindly consider writing a part 2 for this novel.------------------------------------------------------
best novel i have read from this batch, its not likely not gonna get picked but yeah i can dream right.
From the Trans team Novel Saga:Hi Folks,Before we go into the announcement, Novel Saga would like to apologize for keeping this entire matter away from everyone.Novel Saga ensured that chapters were being released despite the tremendous amount of workload before making this big move, but duly deserves the criticism for being rather slow with the release pace, of late.That being said, we’d like to inform you that Novel Saga will be moving several of its novels over to Qidian International very soon.Until the switch takes place, Novel Saga will continue releasing the novels here at a renewed pace. Apologies… and lots of love,Novel Saga Team.
was hooked after the second chapter. awesome job. can't wait for more to be released
Make sure to not read this novel when your life is busy as this novel will get you addicted pretty fast. It's great. It's a mixture of Coiling Dragon and Against the Gods in my eyes. Somehow, it has this Coiling Dragon vibe, especially. I really like it. The characters are not shallow but deep and real. You can feel them as you would a real person. MC is very likeable and relatable. Plotarmour isn't OP and cliches aren't that common either. It has very realistic views and the world works out as it would in reality. If you have spare time, this should be a must read.
This novel is going to very interesting and fun to read❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????????❤️??❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️
I will be honest, in the beginning till 200 chapter I was hopeful that this is going to be epic series. Finally now we are running out of patience due to fillers and unnecessary addition. The writing has become very cheap. It looks like author is forcing himself to write with no real wish/Passion or sentiment behind it. This, story became water down run of the mill quality. It is disheartening to see when your favourite novel become trash quality.
After reading up until the last chapter, I finally understand why the synopsis is like that. It is indeed ****** and thought provoking. It is a collection of mini stories that usually last for 1-3 chapters with different genres that's why it can't be generalized to make a synopsis about, afterall the stories are very different from each other. I was kind of laughing at the synopsis at first when this was still being voted but looking back, the synopsis really says it all... Give this novel a chance, it might just pick your interest like it did to me.
Sigh. It has a good start but too long and windy middle part. The characters are a but flat and yeah, even the choice of heroine is so bad. Sigh. Seems writer is fantastical about rich and glory and typical rich man life.
A funny novel, I admire the character. Although the prologue so fast it needs to calm down. The character of writing is excellent for a web novel, which is surely a pretty excellent grip. The durability of the updates is good. The story as I said before is developing a bit fast but I like the personality of the characters being introduced so far.
ALLLLLLRIGHT, I just got to around to reading your fanfic. I have to say, it's definitely gotten a great story so far. I'm not judging based on spelling errors or mistakes (Being that 1. it's clearly understandable and 2. I'm sure I have some mistakes as well here and there), only the content and the other pieces itself. I would try and strive more towards going in your own direction with some things, I've noticed that you sometimes go with the MHA Anime/Manga and parallel it to Daiki and the others. Which honestly, isn't really a bad thing, it's always good to start somewhere and have a stable build up, even if you have to use some things from the story.The characters could use a little work, by that I mean have some chapters where you could possibly have them interact more with Daiki outside of the whole U.A. High setting (Exams, Fights, and such). Feel free to put your own spin on Daiki as well, do things that you haven't seen any other MHA Fanfic OC do yet! Another thing, I highly encourage that you don't use "Said" as often, unless need be of course, that way it can spice up your chapters! Again, I really would like to see more from some of the characters that are the most important besides Daiki! You've gotten quite a bit, but you've opened the surface on some really awesome character development for these characters.Also, don't be afraid to bring new things to the table! As long as you build them up and have them make sense, it'll go perfectly with your story! For example, the Tanjiro being Leonidus' Great Grandfather in my story, that shouldn't have made sense but having moments outside of the character helped it come together. I'd also recommend that you go back through previous chapters once you have the time and combine some of the sentences with each other, having paragraphs at LEAST 6 to 7 sentences (That aren't filled with action/fighting, then really about 10 to maybe even 12 are acceptable) makes it a bit easier for people to read. Speaking of that, also separating your spoken dialogue from the written dialogue helps out as well! All in all, this story has the potential to be amazing! I honestly love the direction you're going so far, but I really do recommend that you have fun with it, test things out that people may like or that people might not like. Take criticism (Like, actual well thought out, not like "Oh, this sucks, make this a Harem" or "Garbage... Daiki needs to be this and this..." and so on) and use it to improve your story as well. As long as that criticism is valuable, actually pointing out flaws instead of calling it garbage and leaving it at that, you can use that to your upmost advantage. And the obvious, go through your chapters and correct spelling mistakes and what not. Other than that, I personally love this story so far and can't wait to see where you take this! Keep on writing, don't push yourself to put out chapters everyday either, just go at your own pace!
I really liked the idea of this novel and it saddens me that it is left unfinished like this i hope the author get back to this beautiful story